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Band 4+: The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2005 and present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image depicts two floor plans: Art Gallery 2005 with cafe, gallery office leading to Exhibition Room 4, stairs between Exhibition Rooms 3, 2, and 1, receptionist near entrance; present-day Art Gallery features gallery shop replacing gallery office, vending machine added, exhibition room reduced to 3, temporary exhibition replacing Exhibition Room 4, children's area added, lift between stairs and Exhibition Rooms 3, 2, receptionist adjacent to entrance hall, wheelchair ramp at entrance.

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The maps illustrate differences about the art gallery ground floor in 2005 and 2025.

Overall, it is clear that in the art gallery has some changes present day, which is created new lift, Vending machine, Entrance Hall and tamp for whool chair.

In 2005, and in 2025, didn’t change the right sight of the Art Gallery, there are tree Exhibition rooms. Present days entance stay same place, however in 2025, stairs pass a bit left sight and between Exhibition room 3 and stairs have lift at the moment. In 2005, there was Exhibition room 4, which stated opposite of Exhibition room 1. Now, there are Temporary exhibition and Children’s area the same place.

In contrast, Cafe replace it’s place with Gallery shop. Moreover, Gallery shop smaller than Cafe. While, the Gallery office was given it’s place Vending machine in 2025. In addition, receptionist nearer than before to entrance, and today there are Entance Hall in entry. Tamp for whool chair is new, and it’s location is on the left before the entrance.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

gallery: 6

exhibition: 5

there: 4

entrance: 3

place: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are noticeable areas for improvement. The organization is somewhat present, but could be clearer with more distinct paragraphing. The description of changes is present, but lacks detail and precision. Grammatical errors and awkward phrasing are frequent, affecting clarity. To improve, focus on using more precise language, structuring the report more logically, and proofreading carefully for grammatical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The information is not presented in a structured manner, making it difficult to follow the changes and comparisons between the two maps. Paragraphing is weak, and transitions between ideas are abrupt. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and create a smoother flow. Consider grouping information thematically (e.g., changes to the entrance area, changes to the exhibition spaces) to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is some repetition of words and phrases. Expand your vocabulary related to spatial descriptions and changes in layouts. Use synonyms and more descriptive language to make the report more engaging and informative. For example, instead of repeatedly saying 'change,' use words like 'transformed,' 'reconfigured,' or 'modified.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect word order. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors. Consider using a grammar checker to help identify areas for improvement.

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