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Band 5+: The maps below show the changes that have taken place at an Australian Zoo between 1960 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image includes two maps labeled "1960" and "Now," showing changes over time. In 1960, key locations were the Harbour, Gift shop, Picnic area, African animals, Australian animals, Birds, Chimpanzees, and Seal show. The layout included a Gift shop centrally positioned with pathways leading to areas featuring African animals, Australian animals, Chimpanzees, Birds, and Seal show, plus a Picnic area located to the far right. The "Now" map presents the Harbour, Entrance, Ferry, Wild animals, African animals, Australian animals, Seal show, Gift shop, Cable car, and Picnic area. The Gift shop remains centrally located, with pathways extending to Wild animals, Australian animals, African animals, Seal show, and a Cable car leading to the Picnic area. Key additions include the Entrance and Ferry near the Harbour, and a Cable car system connecting various sections to the Picnic area.

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The pictures shows changes of a park or zoo between 1960 and now.

Overall, the place changed a lot and many new things added today. In 1960 it was simple but now it is more big and have cable car and new entrance.

In 1960, African animals was in the top left side and Australian animals was under it. In the middle, there is Birds and Chimpanzees and Seal show. On the right side, there is a big Picnic area. Gift shop was in the bottom middle. Harbor was at the top.

Now, many things are different. African animals moved to middle. The top left side now has Wild animals. Australian animals is still in same place. Birds and Chimpanzees are not there anymore. Entrance is now at the top near Ferry and harbor, and another entrance is at the bottom. Cable car is added near picnic area. Gift shop became bigger at the bottom. Picnic area is same.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

animals: 5

middle: 3

there: 3

picnic: 3

bottom: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main changes between 1960 and now, with a clear overall statement and some comparisons. However, there are minor inaccuracies (e.g., 'park or zoo' instead of zoo, 'Gift shop became bigger' not mentioned in the visual description) and some omissions (e.g., the cable car connecting to the picnic area is not fully described). The structure is logical, but the language could be more precise. To improve, ensure all key features from the visual are included and avoid adding unsupported details.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an overview and paragraphs for each time period, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear referencing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate. To improve, ensure each paragraph focuses on a clear main idea and use linking words appropriately to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is simple and repetitive, with some inaccuracies (e.g., 'more big'). There is limited use of synonyms or precise terms. To enhance lexical resource, incorporate a wider range of location and change-related vocabulary (e.g., 'relocated', 'expanded', 'adjacent to') and avoid informal phrases. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains frequent grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('pictures shows'), tense inconsistency, and incorrect plural forms. Sentence structures are mostly simple. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures and review basic grammar rules, especially subject-verb agreement and tense consistency.

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