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Band 7+: The maps below show the changes to a community center in 10 years' time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents two floor plans, Figure 1 (Community centre 10 years ago) and Figure 2 (Community centre now), both featuring a compass. Figure 1 shows a west side with a Garden and Car park; an entrance leads to a southern section with Reception, Cloakroom, Coffee bar, and Toilets. The center is a Hall (seats 100), with Storage to its north. The east wing contains two Offices, another Office, a further Office, Storage, and a Kitchen. Figure 2 shows the west side with Indoor sports and a Car park; the entrance still leads to a southern section, now containing Reception, Cloakroom, and an Office. The central Hall (seats 100) remains, with Storage and Toilets to its north. The east wing now has a Cafe area and a Kitchen.

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The given maps depict the development of a community centre in 10 years’ time.

Overall, the community centre has undergone significant reorganisation, with recreational and commercial areas replacing much of the original garden and offices, while the hall has remained unchanged.

In terms of the left half of the map, the new indoor sports facility, located in the northwest area of the map, is constructed on where the garden used to be, providing clients with more excercise activities. Behind that, the car park remains unaltered in the lower-left corner, between the indoor sports and the entrance. In the same way, the reception and the cloak room are left as they were in 10 years

Moving to the other side of the centre, the storage in the north has been cleared by a half to make way for the toilet which used to be located in the southest area. The coffee bar has expanded into a cafe area in the upper-right corner of the centre. Moreover, this new cafe area is built at the expense of four offices and the other storage, making this area become the largest section in the centre now. Four offices have been converted into one office that replaces the coffee bar and toilets at the bottom of the map. There is an unchanged kitchen, adjacent to the cafe area, over the ten year change period.

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main changes to the community center over the 10-year period. The overview is clear and provides a good summary of the transformations. The report is generally well-organized, presenting changes in a logical sequence. To improve, ensure complete accuracy in describing the locations and changes. For example, the car park's location is described as 'lower-left corner', but it's in the upper-left corner. Also, the storage in the north has not been cleared by half to make way for the toilet. The toilet has been moved to the north of the hall, but it is not connected to the storage. The coffee bar has not expanded into a cafe area. The cafe area is in the east wing, while the coffee bar was in the south wing. The report could benefit from more precise language and attention to detail to avoid minor inaccuracies.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a clear overview and organizes the information logically, generally making it easy to follow the changes. However, transitions between some points could be smoother to enhance the flow. For example, the shift from the west side to the east side of the center could be more clearly signaled. Paragraphing is generally well-managed, but consider if breaking up longer paragraphs would improve readability.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary suitable for describing changes in a map. Terms like 'reorganisation,' 'unaltered,' 'converted,' and 'at the expense of' are used appropriately. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more varied vocabulary related to spatial changes and facility descriptions. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'area,' explore synonyms like 'space,' 'zone,' or 'section' depending on the context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar, with a variety of sentence structures used. However, there are a few grammatical errors and phrasing issues that need attention. For example, 'excercise activities' should be 'exercise activities,' and 'in the southest area' should be 'in the southeast area.' Also, 'cleared by a half' is not idiomatic; consider rephrasing to 'reduced by half.' Addressing these minor errors will improve the overall grammatical accuracy.

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