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The image presents two layouts of Lakeview Apartments labeled "Present" and "Development plans (by 2030)." In the present layout, from left to right, there is a Community Centre, Block A with 6 units, Block B with 6 units, Block C with 6 units, Block D with 6 units, and a blank space labeled "LAKE". In the development plans for 2030, from left to right, there is a blank space labeled "Supermarket" with arrows pointing out and in, Block A with 6 units, a space labeled "Kids' Game Centre," Block B with 6 units, a blank space labeled "Family Courtyard," Block C with 6 units, Block D with 6 units, and a space labeled "LAKE." There is no numerical data or percentages provided.

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The maps demonstrate the layout of Lakeview apartments in the present and future development plans for the year 2030.

Overall, the major changes will be happened in northwest area, where all greenery spaces and community centre will be replaced by a kids’ game centre and a family gym. However, on the east side, lake along with benches will remain unchanged.

To begin with, in the present time, the Lakeview apartments have four blocks in the centre, named as a, b, c, and d. In northwest side, there are plenty of trees along with community centre in southwest. Beside community centre, there is a gate and some plants. In Lakeview apartments’ layout, there is a lake with some benches in east area.

For 2030 development, plans, in the middle of blocks, a courtyard will be built and greenery around northwest side will be removed and the family gym will be added. Opposite family gym, a kids’ game centre will be constructed and in south, two new gates for entry and exit will be built. In the middle of two gates, a supermarket with two paths will be constructed. While, the lake and benches in east remain constant.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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centre: 6

lakeview: 3

northwest: 3

community: 3

family: 3

benches: 3

there: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and describes the main changes between the present and future layouts. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the report mentions a 'family gym' and 'two new gates' which are not present in the visual description, and it omits the 'Family Courtyard' and the 'Supermarket' details. The overall structure is clear, but the inclusion of inaccurate information in key areas detracts from the task achievement. To improve, ensure all details are accurately represented and avoid adding information not shown in the visual.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and separate paragraphs for the present and future layouts. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'in northwest side' and 'in south'). The overview is somewhat vague and does not clearly highlight the most significant changes. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that transitions between ideas are smooth. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary appropriate for describing maps (e.g., 'layout', 'replaced', 'constructed', 'remain unchanged'). However, there are some inaccuracies and repetitions (e.g., 'plenty of trees' could be more precise, and 'in the middle' is used multiple times). The phrasing 'will be happened' is incorrect. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, and ensure word choices are natural and accurate. For example, use 'located' instead of 'in' and 'situated' for positions. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity, such as 'will be happened' (should be 'will happen'), 'in northwest side' (should be 'on the northwest side'), and 'in south' (should be 'in the south'). There are also issues with article usage and prepositions. The sentence 'For 2030 development, plans, in the middle of blocks, a courtyard will be built' is awkwardly structured. To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures with accurate grammar. Proofread to eliminate basic errors and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles.

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