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Band 6+: The maps show the changes of an office building between present and future .

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The image displays two floor plans for "A Office Building in a particular government". The "present building" plan features an entrance, a reception area, four offices, a grass area on the left, a kitchen, a canteen, a stock room, WCs, and another grass area on the right. The "planned future development" plan shows an entrance, a reception area, a total of three offices, an outdoor seating area, a stock room, a coffee machine, WCs, and a meeting room.

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The two pictures compare the current layout of the floor of the office building which is in a particular government, and with a plan to redesign the same space.

We can see that the new design proposal involves making a number of changes to the ground floor of the building. There are no plans to change stock room.

At present, the office building has the grass areas on both sides. However, the future development is to change the left side to the outdoor seating area and the grass area on the right side will separate to a meeting room, which will include WCs and a coffee machine.

The four offices in the redeveloped building will on different sides, while the kitchen and the canteen are replaced by two offices out of four which are beside stock room. Finally, the entrance to the reception will be in the middle of the other two offices.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

building: 4

which: 3

offices: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main changes to the office building layout. However, there are some omissions and a lack of specific details that could enhance the description. To improve, focus on providing more precise information about the location and size of the changes, and ensure all key features are mentioned.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report provides a general overview of the changes, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping changes thematically or spatially to enhance coherence. For example, discuss changes to the left side of the building together, then the right side, and finally the central areas. The transition between sentences and paragraphs could be smoother. Using cohesive devices like 'furthermore,' 'in contrast,' or 'similarly' can help connect ideas more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'change,' consider synonyms like 'transform,' 'convert,' or 'remodel.' Also, try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to building layouts and design to demonstrate a wider range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, the sentence 'The four offices in the redeveloped building will on different sides' is grammatically incorrect. It should be revised to something like 'In the redeveloped building, the offices will be located on different sides.' Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate preposition usage. Reviewing basic grammar rules and proofreading carefully can help reduce these errors.

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