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Band 7+: The maps show the changes that have taken place at an Australian Zoo between 1960 and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two maps, one from 1960 and one from 'Now', both with a north-pointing arrow. The 1960 map shows a Harbour to the north, enclosures for African animals, Australian animals, Birds, and Chimpanzees, a Seal Show, a Gift Shop, and a Picnic Area, all connected by dotted paths. The 'Now' map shows a Harbour, a Ferry, and an Entrance in the north, a second Entrance in the southwest, enclosures for Wild animals, Australian animals, and African Animals, a Seal Show, a Gift Shop, a Picnic Area, and a Cable Car, also connected by paths.

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The maps illustrates how the Australian Zoo has been changed from 1960 to the present day.

Overall, the zoo has undergone significant alterations, notably the introduction of new facilities such as entrances and cable cars, along with the relocation of some areas such as the harbour and African animals, and the complete elimination of Chimpanzees and birds.

Regarding the northern section, the habour in the eastern side has now been relocated to the west, while there has been a new entrance and a ferry in the east. Concerning the southern area, the gift shop in the middle has now been rebuilt to become more modern than it was in 1960. Meanwhile, a new entrance in the southwest has been added.

Turning to the middle section, whilst the picnic area in the east has stayed unchanged, the seal show and chimpanzees have now been removed to make way for new cable cars at the same side. Moreover, while the birds have been eliminated, the seal show has been moved to another place where it has been next to the African animals. Additionally, the wild animals has replaced with the African animals in the west; in contrast, the Australian animals have experienced no change.

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Task Response

The report effectively summarizes the changes in the Australian Zoo between 1960 and the present day. The overview is clear, and the body paragraphs logically group and compare the key features. To further enhance the response, ensure that all significant changes are mentioned and that the level of detail is consistent throughout the report.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and overall structure. The information is presented logically, and the use of cohesive devices such as 'overall,' 'notably,' 'regarding,' 'concerning,' 'meanwhile,' 'turning to,' 'whilst,' 'moreover,' 'additionally,' and 'in contrast' helps to connect ideas and guide the reader through the changes. However, there are instances where the transitions could be smoother, and the connections between some sentences could be more explicit to enhance the flow of the report.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary related to describing changes and locations, such as 'relocated,' 'elimination,' 'rebuilt,' 'modern,' 'added,' 'unchanged,' 'removed,' 'make way for,' 'replaced,' and 'experienced no change.' However, there is room for improvement in using more precise and sophisticated vocabulary to describe the specific changes and features of the zoo. For example, instead of 'significant alterations,' you could use more descriptive phrases like 'underwent a complete transformation' or 'was extensively redeveloped.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar, with a variety of sentence structures and accurate use of tenses and articles. However, there are some minor grammatical errors and phrasing issues that need to be addressed. For example, in the first sentence, 'The maps illustrates' should be 'The maps illustrate.' In the second paragraph, 'the habour in the eastern side has now been relocated to the west' could be rephrased as 'the harbor, previously located on the eastern side, has now been relocated to the west.' Addressing these minor errors and refining the phrasing will further enhance the clarity and accuracy of the report.

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