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Band 7+: The maps show the layout of a beachfront in Australia in 1950 and its current design.

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The image displays two maps comparing a beachfront in Australia from 1950 to the present. In 1950, the map shows a city at the top border, followed by a road leading to a car park on the right side. Below the car park are three dining tables aligned vertically, next to which is a pavilion. On the left side of the dining tables, there is a playground. Below the playground, running parallel to the beach, is a 25m pool adjacent to the beach area, which also features a lighthouse at the bottom right corner. In the contemporary map, the city remains at the top, and the road leads to two separate car parks, one near the city and another adjacent to the beach on the right. Centrally, three dining tables are aligned between a restaurant on the left and the unchanged pavilion on the right. Below, a 50m pool stretches parallel to the beach, and a surf club is positioned between the pool and the lighthouse.

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Overall, the beachfront underwent extensive modernization, shifting from a quiet, natural layout into a highly developed recreational zone.

In 1950, the western part of the beachfront was occupied by a playground, with four dining tables positioned immediately to its east. In the central part, there was a small pavilion. A car park was located on the eastern side of the beachfront. The southern section contained a large beach, accompanied by two 25-metre swimming pools, and a small lighthouse was positioned in the southern part of the beachfront.

At present, a playground has been replaced by a car park, and another car park has been small expanded. However, the four dining tables, pavilion, lighthouse, and 25-metre sw imming pools remained unchanged throughout the period. A restaurant and a surf club have been added on the western side of the beach, while the swimming pools have been enlarged from 25 metres to 50 metres. In addition, another surf club has been established near the eastern part of the beach.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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beach: 3

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Task Response

The report appropriately addresses the task by describing the main changes between the two maps. It provides a clear overall summary and organizes the information logically. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the report mentions 'two 25-metre swimming pools' and 'four dining tables' which may not match the visual description (which indicates three dining tables and one 25m pool). Additionally, the report states that the playground was replaced by a car park, but the description suggests a car park was added near the city and another near the beach, not necessarily replacing the playground. The report also omits the detail about the road leading to the car parks and the specific location of the surf club. To improve, ensure that all key features are accurately described and that the report fully covers the changes without introducing inaccuracies.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized with a clear overall statement and logical paragraphing. The description flows smoothly from the past to the present, and the use of cohesive devices (e.g., 'In 1950', 'At present', 'However', 'In addition') helps the reader follow the changes. Minor lapses: the phrase 'a playground has been replaced by a car park' could be more precise (e.g., 'the playground has been replaced by a car park'), and the placement of 'small expanded' is awkward, but these do not significantly impede understanding.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, such as 'underwent extensive modernization', 'occupied by', 'positioned', 'accompanied by', and 'enlarged'. There is some repetition (e.g., 'beachfront' and 'beach' are used multiple times), and a few collocation issues ('small expanded' should be 'slightly expanded' or 'expanded slightly'). Overall, the lexical resource is adequate and mostly accurate, but there is room for more variety and precision.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including passive voice ('was occupied', 'has been replaced'), comparative forms ('enlarged from 25 metres to 50 metres'), and complex sentences. There are very few errors, and those present are minor (e.g., 'small expanded' and the spacing in 'sw imming'). Punctuation is generally correct. The grammar is accurate and controlled, though not flawless, which is typical of a high band score.

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