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Band 6+: The maps show the town of Wildan in 1990 and today. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image compares town of Wilden between 1990 and today, showing a transformation from a transport depot with two factories, six homes, and four blocks of flats by the waterfront and river in 1990 to a community center and a mini golf course replacing the transport depot, three tables and chairs area (one removed for the golf course), two factories, six homes, and four blocks of flats remaining with an addition of a restaurant and a cafe by the waterfront today, retaining the park in both maps, connected by a road.

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he map illustrates the town of Wilden from the top view in 1990 and today. Overall, if we compare it to the 1990 we could see that today there are some new buildings and also some replacement and removement.

In 1990, around the area of the wavefront there were four factories and a cafe at the right side end of the road. While across the street, there was a transport depot located at the left side with two factories beside it and on the right side there was a park. Behind the park and the two factories there were five houses.

At present, the buildings around the wavefront area are changed to a restaurant with some outdoor tables and chairs at the most left side and four blocks of flats on the right side of the restaurant. Across the street, a community centre is made at the most right side. The transport depot and the two factories are replaced with a new and larger park with a mini golf course in it. Finally there was some removement of houses which now the town only has three houses.

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The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The description of the 1990 map is not entirely accurate (e.g., the number of factories and houses). The description of the changes is also not fully comprehensive. To improve, ensure greater accuracy in describing the details of both maps and provide a more complete account of the changes that have occurred.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has some issues with coherence and cohesion. The organization is generally clear, but the transitions between sentences and paragraphs could be smoother. Using more varied cohesive devices would improve the flow of the report. For example, you could use phrases like 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' or 'Furthermore' to connect ideas more effectively. The introduction and overview could be more concise and focused.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but could be more precise and varied. There are instances of repetitive word choices (e.g., 'there was/were'). Try to use synonyms or rephrase sentences to avoid repetition. Incorporating more specific vocabulary related to urban development and changes would enhance the report. For example, instead of 'new buildings,' you could use terms like 'new establishments' or 'new constructions.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Correcting these errors would significantly improve the report's overall quality. Focus on subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate use of articles (a/an/the). Also, pay attention to sentence structure to ensure sentences are clear and grammatically sound. For example, the sentence 'In 1990, around the area of the wavefront there were four factories and a cafe at the right side end of the road' could be rephrased for better clarity and grammatical correctness.

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