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Band 7+: The pie chart and the line graph shows the workforce and the unemployment in Australia from 1996 to 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. (Mixed Charts)

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The image shows two visual data summaries: a pie chart and a line graph. Left: pie chart "Workforce in Australia by place of birth (2003)": Born in Australia 76%, NESC 14%, and ESC 10%. Right: line graph "Unemployment in Australia by place of birth (1993-2003)": Year-by-year data (percentage of group): 1993: Australia 9%, ESC 7%, NESC 15%; 1995: Australia 8%, ESC 6%, NESC 13%; 1997: Australia 7%, ESC 6%, NESC 11%; 1999: Australia 6%, ESC 5%, NESC 9%; 2001: Australia 6%, ESC 4.5%, NESC 7%; 2003: Australia 6%, ESC 4%, NESC 7%.

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The pie compare the ratio of the workforce and the line exhibit jobless people in Australia between 1996 and 2003.

Overall, a large proportion of people who were born in Australia dominated the workforce, while ESC contributed minimally. In contrast, the unemployment rate in Australia saw a strong fall over the period.

Regarding the workforce, the highest percentage of Australian people contributing to the workplace is 74 percent, while the figure for the group of people who were born in non-English speaking countries was 14 percent, indicating a significant difference. People who were born in English-speaking countries were the least popular in the Australian workforce, representing only 10%.

In terms of unemployment ratio, despite ENC having the largest unemployment rate initially, it experienced a substantial change by the end, falling nearly 7% to 3%. Interestingly, starting from around 4%, both Australia and NSC faced a huge decline, respectively, resulting in almost 1.5% and 2% significantly over the years.

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workforce: 4

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of both the pie chart and the line graph, providing relevant data and comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data cited (e.g., '74 percent' should be '76 percent', and the acronyms are not correct). To improve, ensure data accuracy and use correct acronyms (NESC instead of ENC and NSC). Also, pay attention to the time frame mentioned in the task (1996-2003) and ensure the report aligns with it.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall structure, including an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. The progression of ideas is logical, and the use of cohesive devices is adequate. However, there are instances where the connection between sentences could be smoother to enhance the flow of information. For example, in the final paragraph, clarifying the reference to 'ENC' (assuming it's a typo for 'NESC') would improve coherence. Also, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single, clear aspect of the data to maintain clarity.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, appropriate for describing the data. Terms like 'dominated,' 'contributed minimally,' 'significant difference,' and 'substantial change' are effectively used. However, there's room to enhance the sophistication of the language by incorporating more precise and varied vocabulary. For instance, instead of 'large proportion,' consider using 'a significant majority.' Also, ensure accuracy in word choice; for example, 'least popular' might not be the most accurate descriptor for workforce representation.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with a variety of sentence structures. Most sentences are grammatically correct and punctuation is generally accurate. However, there are some minor errors that need attention. For example, 'The pie compare' should be 'The pie chart compares,' and 'jobless people' could be rephrased for better clarity (e.g., 'unemployment rates'). Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and article usage to further improve grammatical accuracy.

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