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Band 5+: The pie chart below gives information on types of hobby classes and the number of members in 2022, Russian Federation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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This pie chart illustrates people’s preference of hobby classes in Russian Fedeartion, 2022.

First of all, vocal is the most popular type of hobby, around fourty per cent of people in Russia instrested in it. Otherwise, dancing classes’s audience is less than signing on twelve percent. Both of this classes have seventy per cent of this pie chart. Overall, the applied art and drama have about thirty per cent of all audience, the drama classes are visited about eighteen per cent, the applied art classes – fourty per cent. As we can see this classes are not intrested by the people as the first two classes.

To summarize, in this pie chart we can see that the most popular hobby classes are vocal and dance, however the drama and applied art do not extremly popular in Russian Federation.

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drama: 3

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The report adequately summarizes the main features of the pie chart, highlighting the popularity of vocal and dance classes compared to drama and applied art. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data representation, such as stating that drama classes are visited about eighteen percent and applied art classes at forty percent, which does not align with the actual percentages provided in the description. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report is mostly coherent and cohesive, with a clear structure and logical progression of ideas. However, there are some issues with sentence structure and word choice that affect the overall flow and readability of the report. Additionally, there are some repetitive phrases that could be improved for better cohesion.

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The report demonstrates an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but there are inaccuracies and awkward phrasings that detract from the overall lexical resource. Some words are misspelled, such as 'instrested' instead of 'interested,' and there are instances of wordiness that could be simplified for better clarity.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

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There is a mix of simple and complex sentence structures used in the report, showcasing some grammatical range. However, there are several grammatical errors present, including subject-verb agreement issues, incorrect verb tenses, and punctuation errors that impact the overall accuracy of the writing.

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