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The image displays two pie charts titled "Ad Spending by Media Type in 2012 in India" and "Ad Spending by Media Type in 2017 in India." In 2012, TV accounts for 43%, Print 38%, Digital 5%, Outdoor 6%, Radio 7%, and Cinema 1%. In 2017, TV accounts for 45%, Print 30.9%, Digital 15%, Outdoor 5.0%, Radio 4.0%, and Cinema 0.1%.

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The provided pie chart illustrates the preferred social media channels for youth in the United Kingdom between 2012 and 2017.

Overall, it is evident that TV sector accounted for the largest share, while cinema represented the samllest proportion over the period. Some categories showed moderate values, whereas others varied significantly.

Looking at the data in more detail, in 2012 TV comprised approriximately 43%, making it the dominant category. This was followed by print ar around 38%, whereas digital (6%), outdoor (5%), radio (7%) and cinema (2%). These all sectors accounted 21% of the total during the period.

In 2017, Tv sector was as similar as 2012 represented 43%, however print sector a slight decline about 30% during the period. In the next period, redio experienced a rising growth approximately 15%. Outdoor (5%), radio (4%), cinema (2%) experienced lowest categories similar as older period. Morever, some categories experienced changes, and the structure of the chart stayed similar throughout the period.

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