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Band 6+: the pie chart below shows the average household ecpence in a country in 1950 and 2010.

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The image displays two pie charts comparing average household expenditures in 1950 and 2010 across six categories. In 1950: Housing 72.1%, Food 11.2%, Health care 2.4%, Education 6.6%, Transportation 3.3%, Other 4.4%. In 2010: Housing 22.0%, Food 34.0%, Health care 4.5%, Education 6.3%, Transportation 14.0%, Other 19.2%.

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The given pie chart represents the changes of the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010 such as healthcare and education.

As can be seen the highest expenditure in 1950 was housing and the lowest was healthcare, and in 2010 the highest expenditure was food and the lowest was also health care.

According to the pie chart, the housing expenditures were 72.1% then it decreased to become 22%. In addition, food expenditures increased from 11.2% in 1950 to 34% in 2010. Moreover, the expenditures of education have not change so much they were 6.6% in 1950 then 6.3% in 2010. Furthermore, healthcare expenditures have increased from 2.4% in 1950 to 4.5% in 2010. Then, the transportation expenditures have jumped from 3.3% in 1950 to 14% in 2010. And, the other expenditures have risen from 4.4% in 1950 to 19.2% in 2010.

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expenditures: 7

healthcare: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and data points from the charts. However, it could be improved by providing a clearer overview and more structured comparison. Minor inaccuracies (e.g., 'ecpence' instead of 'expenditure') and some repetitive phrasing are present. Focus on summarizing key changes and avoiding listing all data points. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure but lacks clear paragraphing and uses repetitive linking words like 'In addition', 'Moreover', 'Furthermore', 'Then', 'And'. Consider grouping similar trends together and using a wider range of cohesive devices. The introduction could be more concise and the overview more prominent.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but limited. Words like 'jumped' and 'risen' are used, but there is repetition of 'expenditures' and 'increased'. Try using synonyms such as 'rose', 'climbed', 'surged', or 'soared' for variety. Also, 'have not change' should be 'have not changed'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly correct but contains errors like 'have not change' and missing commas after introductory phrases. Sentence structures are simple and repetitive. Use more complex structures, such as relative clauses or passive voice, to improve range.

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