Pie Chart

Band 5+: The pie chart below shows the results of a survey of the causes of poor learning outcomes in schools in a particular country in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image depicts a pie chart illustrating causes of poor learning outcomes in schools in a particular country in 2011: working parents 27%, lack of revision 20%, poor facilities 10%, unskilled teachers 35%, and upbringing 8%.

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The pic graph depicts the data on the survey result that causes of poor learning outcomes in schools in a specific country in the year of 2011.

Overall, it can be seen that poor learning outcomes is caused for several reason, particularly, unskilled teacher and upbringing are mostly reponsible. Further, lack of revision was held less responsible.

Looking at the chart in more details it is evident that the responsible unskilles teacher for poor schooling outcomes was 35%, which is the highest on the chart. Another main reason for weak learning result was upbringing, which was 27%.

Turning to the remaining chart, it is clear that 20% working parents was also a reason for the poor schooling outcomes as well as 10% poor facilities aslo held responsible for the weak learning outcomes. Finally, lack of revision for the weak learning outcomes was 8%, which was the lowest in the data.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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learning: 5

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, presenting the main features of the pie chart and making some comparisons. However, there are some omissions and lapses in detail. To improve, focus on more precise language and a more structured approach to comparing the data. For example, you could group similar categories together or highlight the most significant differences more explicitly.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize the information, but the flow is somewhat disjointed. The introduction and overview are present, but the transitions between details could be smoother. Paragraphing is attempted, but could be improved to enhance clarity. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and somewhat repetitive. There's a reliance on simple words and phrases, which limits the precision and sophistication of the description. To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to causes, effects, and proportions. For example, instead of 'main reason,' consider 'primary factor' or 'significant contributor.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, article usage, and preposition choice. To improve, focus on constructing more varied sentence structures and carefully proofreading for grammatical errors. Pay attention to verb tenses and correct article usage.

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