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Band 6+: The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents pie charts depicting 2010 household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia; Japan's allocation includes: Housing 21%, Transport 10%, Food 24%, Health care 6%, Other goods and services 29%; Malaysia's allocation includes: Housing 34%, Transport 10%, Food 27%, Health care 3%, Other goods and services 26%.

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The provided pie charts illustrates the ordinary household spendinsg in two asian countries (Japan and Malaysia) in 2010.

Overall, it is clear that the considerable part of money is spent on housing in Malaysia and on other goods and services in Japan.

Spendings on other goods and services accounted for 29 per cent in Japan, and this figure was very similar for Malaysia, at 26%. A large number of the japanese spent money on housing (21%), though this proportion of money used for this purpose is more in Malaysia (above a third). A significant percentages of savings was spent in both asian countries (around 25%).

A fifth of the japanese income was invested in tranport, but the malaysians spent money on this 10 per cent less (only 10%). A overwhelming minority spent savings on health care in both Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.

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The report accurately addresses the task by summarizing the main features and making relevant comparisons between household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia. Minor inaccuracies and omissions are present, but do not detract significantly from the overall response. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report demonstrates a clear progression of ideas, but the flow could be improved. Some sentences lack smooth transitions, and the overall structure could benefit from more sophisticated linking words and phrases. The grammar errors affect the coherence and cohesion.

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6.5

The report uses a range of vocabulary appropriate to the task. While mostly accurate, some word choices could be more precise and sophisticated. The range of vocabulary is sufficient for the task.

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The report demonstrates a range of grammatical structures, but there are noticeable errors that affect the overall clarity and accuracy. Improved grammatical accuracy would significantly enhance the report.

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