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The image lists energy source percentages for two countries in 2010. For Germany (2010), the data is: Coal 40%, Natural Gas 25%, Nuclear 20%, Renewable 10%, and Other 5%. For France (2010), the data is: Coal 20%, Natural Gas 15%, Nuclear 45%, Renewable 15%, and Other 5%.

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The pie charts below illustrate the proportion how the sources of energy have been allocated in France and Germany that used for electrical supplies in 2010.

Overall, the usage of coal has been the highest in Germany, whereas in France the used of nuclear has been the highest peak throughout the year.

To begin with, Germany’s allocation electrical supplies the usage of coal which is 40 percents was two times higher than the used of nuclear power.On the other hand France has the most used in nuclear energy which is nearly a half.Additionally, in Germany used a quarter of natural gases compares to France which their used with a number of 15 percents.However the renewable energy distribution in France was greater than Germany with a number of 15 and 10 percents respectively.Futhermore, the proportion of other used for electrical generator between two countries seem to be stable,meanwhile there are significant difference between two countries.

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The report adequately covers the requirements of the task, providing a general overview and highlighting key differences between the energy sources used in Germany and France. However, there are some areas for improvement. The report could benefit from more precise language and a clearer structure. For instance, the introduction could be more concise, and the body paragraphs could be organized to compare specific energy sources more directly. Additionally, while the report mentions the percentages, it could provide more context or analysis of the data, such as discussing the implications of these differences. Overall, the report demonstrates a good understanding of the task but could be enhanced with more detail and clarity.

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The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. There are instances of inappropriate word choice ('highest peak throughout the year'). To improve, focus on using more specific and varied vocabulary related to proportions, energy sources, and comparisons. Avoid redundancy and aim for more concise phrasing.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and misuse of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving basic grammar skills and sentence construction to enhance clarity and accuracy. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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