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Band 6+: The pie charts below show the proportions of visits to Ireland last year by age group,and by gender and type of visit.

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The image contains two pie charts, the first one indicates the Age Group Proportion of Visits to Ireland for Last Year; 0-15 years: 6%, 16-24 years: 9%, 25-34 years: 23%, 35-44 years: 19%, 45-54 years: 23%, 55-64 years: 11%, 65 years & over: 8%. The second chart indicates the Proportion of Visits Last Year to Ireland by Males and Females and by Type of Visit; Females: Business Visit: 4%, Females: Leisure Visit: 40%, Males: Leisure Visit: 43%, Males: Business Visit: 13%.

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The two pie charts compare the age group percentages of visits to Ireland one year ago, and the proportion of each gender who went there for leisure visit or business visit.

Overall, while children from 0 to 15 years old were the lowest percentage, the opposite was true for the 25-34 years and 45-54 years. In addition, the proportion of people who went to Ireland for leisure activities was much higher than business activities in both genders.

For the age group, they were recorded at 23% in two age groups 25-34 years and 45-54 years. This was followed by young people and old people, at 11% for people from 55-64 years old, and 9% for both 16-24 years and people older 66 years old. Additionally, children from 0 to 15 years old accounted for a low figure, at just 6%.

Regarding the proportion of gender and type of visit, in both gender, the figure for business visit was much lower than leisure visit. For business visits, it was recorded at 4% of women, and 13% of men. Conversely, the percentage of leisure visits in females and male were 40% and 43% respectively.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

years: 9

people: 5

leisure: 4

visit: 4

business: 4

visits: 3

proportion: 3

gender: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by summarizing the key features of both pie charts. It provides a clear overview and highlights the main trends, such as the dominance of leisure visits and the age groups with the highest proportions. The data is accurately reported, with only minor omissions (e.g., the 65+ age group is mentioned as 'older 66 years old' but the percentage is not explicitly stated, though it is implied). The organization is logical, and comparisons are made appropriately. To further improve, ensure all data points are explicitly mentioned and consider varying sentence structures for better flow.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized with a clear introduction, overall summary, and separate paragraphs for age groups and gender/visit type. Cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'In addition', 'For the age group', and 'Regarding' are used effectively to guide the reader. However, there are minor lapses in coherence, such as the vague reference 'they' in 'For the age group, they were recorded at 23%', which could be more precise. Additionally, the phrase 'young people and old people' is imprecise when referring to specific age brackets. To improve, ensure that pronouns have clear antecedents and that descriptions are specific. Overall, the message is easy to follow, but a few refinements would enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with a good range of terms such as 'proportions', 'accounted for', 'recorded at', 'conversely', and 'respectively'. However, there is some repetition (e.g., 'visit' appears frequently) and minor inaccuracies in word choice, such as 'leisure visit' instead of 'leisure visits' and 'in both gender' instead of 'in both genders'. To achieve a higher score, aim for more varied and precise vocabulary, and ensure correct collocations and singular/plural forms. For example, 'leisure activities' could be used instead of 'leisure visit' in some instances. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors that affect accuracy. These include subject-verb agreement issues (e.g., 'the percentage ... were'), incorrect pronoun reference ('they' for age groups), and preposition errors ('older 66 years old' instead of '66 years and over'). Punctuation is generally correct, but some sentences are awkwardly phrased. To improve, focus on consistent subject-verb agreement, precise pronoun usage, and correct prepositions. Proofreading for these common errors will enhance grammatical accuracy.

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