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Band 4+: The pie charts show the first place Germans and Nigerians go to in order to access the news in a typical week. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two pie charts showing the first place people from Germany and urban areas in Nigeria go for their news. In Germany: TV 45%, Newspaper 30%, Radio 10%, Internet 11%, Other sources 4%. In urban areas in Nigeria: TV 63%, Newspaper 22%, Radio 13%, Internet 1%, Friends and family 1%. Each chart is broken down by category represented by colored segments: TV, Newspaper, Radio, Internet, Other sources/Friends and family.

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This pie chart illustrates the proportion of news to obtain in an initial place in a typical week.The units are measured in a percentages (%).

Overall, the both countries (German and Nigeria) emensily utilize the televission for their early news coverage in a starting.Whereas, the least used source is friends and family for both nation.

The early area where Germans colect their update from TV is 30% while Nigerians are 63% from televission.Furthormore, citizen of Germany acess information from newspaper is 45% and from Nigeria, their people got update from Newspaper is slightly low (13%) from Germany.

The residents of Nigeria get more bulletin 22% from radio then Germans who got only 10%. Whereas, the German citizens obtain more coverage from internet is 11% while the other hand, explore least headline from internet which is much lower (1%). The other sources get least breaking news from initial areas which is 1% in Nigeria while 4% in Germany.

The larger ratio is being observed in Television while the least one shows in other sources and family friends in both Nations in starting of their week.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main features of the pie charts and making some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., TV for Germany is stated as 30% instead of 45%, and newspaper for Germany is given as 45% instead of 30%). The report also contains some irrelevant or unclear statements, such as 'the least used source is friends and family for both nation' which is not fully accurate for Germany. The structure is present but could be more coherent, and the language contains errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the key figures, organizing the information more logically (e.g., grouping similar categories), and using clearer language with correct grammar and vocabulary.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to present the data but lacks a clear and logical structure. The information is not well-organized, and the comparisons are not clearly highlighted. The use of cohesive devices is limited and often incorrect, making the message difficult to follow. To improve, consider using a clear overview paragraph and grouping related information together. Use linking words and phrases appropriately to show relationships between data points.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and repetitive, with several inaccuracies (e.g., 'emensily', 'televission', 'colect', 'Furthormore', 'acess'). There is an attempt to use some topic-specific words, but the range is narrow and the control is weak. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing data (e.g., 'proportion', 'percentage', 'significant', 'minority') and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Practice using synonyms to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that significantly impede understanding. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, article usage, word order, and sentence structure (e.g., 'the both countries', 'the least used source is friends and family for both nation'). Punctuation is also inconsistent. To improve, focus on basic sentence construction, practice using correct tenses, and proofread carefully. Consider using simpler sentences to ensure clarity.

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