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Band 4+: The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the Australia in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two pie charts detailing immigration and emigration reasons; for immigration, 38% definite jobs, 10% looking for jobs, 22% formal study, 17% accompany/join, 13% others; for emigration, 37% definite jobs, 20% looking for jobs, 6% formal study, 16% accompany/join, 21% others.

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the charts demonstrate some of the most popular reasons for migration of individuals to and from australia in 2010.

immigrated account for 38% of definite jobs, which was the highest proportion of reasons. then, this figure 1% decreased in emigrated, which was 37%. in comparison, formal study were responsible for 22%, while the remaining were under 17%.

next, the reason for job seeking in emigrated was the largest percentage after definite job, which was about 20%. however, while accompany contributed for 16%, formal study only make up 6% in this case. in addition, the remaining 21% were made up of other reasons.

overall, while individuals decided to move from and to australia using definite job for their main reason, onky aboute fewer people moved for study

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The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main features and making relevant comparisons. However, a more detailed analysis of the data and a more precise comparison would improve the response. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report's message is generally understandable, but the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and clearer transitions between ideas. Grammatical errors and unclear phrasing affect the overall coherence.

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The report uses a sufficient range of vocabulary, but more precise and sophisticated word choices would enhance the overall quality. Some lexical inaccuracies are present.

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The report contains several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and accuracy of the message. Improved grammatical accuracy and a wider range of grammatical structures are needed.

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