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Band 6+: The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two pie charts detailing the main reasons for immigration to and emigration from the UK in 2007. For immigration: 'Looking for work' constitutes 30%, 'Definite job' 22%, 'Formal study' 26%, 'Accompany/join' 15%, 'No reason stated' 6%, 'Other' 1%. For emigration: 'Looking for work' represents 29%, 'Definite job' 22%, 'Formal study' 4%, 'Accompany/join' 13%, 'No reason stated' 18%, 'Other' 14%.

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The pie graphs illustrate the main motvations for immigration and emigration from the UK in 2007.

Overall, definite job emerged as the predominant category in both proportion of immigration and emigration whereas formal study recorded a far more common reason for immigration than emigration.

Regarding immigration, definite occupation accounted for 30%, one-third of the total and making it the most prevalent reason. This was closely followed by formal study with 26%, slightly over a quarter. Conversely, people who accompained with their family members in the UK made up 15%, lagging behind the formal study figure by 9 percentage points. The three remaining categories were less far common. Seeking job opportunities and other unspecific reasons shared the nearly same figure at 12% and 11% respectively whereas no reason stated accounted for only 6% of the total.

Turning next to the emigration, a definite job also recorded the largest proportion for this group, making up 29%. There were over one-fifth of migrants that left to the UK to search job somewhere else, followed by no reason stated with 18%. Other unspecific motivations and people who joined with family members accounted for 14% and 13% respectively. Studying was the least common reason for this emigartion, with only 4% of the total.

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reason: 5

immigration: 4

emigration: 3

definite: 3

formal: 3

study: 3

common: 3

accounted: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by summarizing the main features of both pie charts and making comparisons. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and separate paragraphs for immigration and emigration. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., 'definite job' is stated as 30% for immigration, but it should be 22%; 'Looking for work' is misrepresented as 12% and 11% for immigration, while it should be 30%). Additionally, there are minor spelling errors (e.g., 'motvations', 'accompained', 'emigartion'). To improve, ensure data accuracy and proofread for spelling and grammar. The comparisons made are relevant, but more precise data reporting would strengthen the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall structure, including an introduction, an overview, and separate paragraphs for immigration and emigration. However, there are some minor lapses in coherence, such as the phrase 'less far common' which is unclear, and the transition between ideas could be smoother in places. The use of cohesive devices is adequate but could be more varied to enhance flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'predominant category', 'prevalent reason'). However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'motvations' (misspelling), 'accompained' (incorrect form), 'less far common', and 'search job somewhere else' (unnatural phrasing). A wider range of precise vocabulary and more natural collocations would improve the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include 'motvations' (spelling), 'accompained' (spelling), 'emigartion' (spelling), 'making it the most prevalent reason' (fragment), and 'people who accompained with their family members in the UK' (incorrect preposition). While the overall meaning is generally clear, more consistent accuracy and control over grammar and punctuation are needed.

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