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Band 6+: The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two pie charts detailing the main reasons for immigration to and emigration from the UK in 2007. For immigration: 'Looking for work' constitutes 30%, 'Definite job' 22%, 'Formal study' 26%, 'Accompany/join' 15%, 'No reason stated' 6%, 'Other' 1%. For emigration: 'Looking for work' represents 29%, 'Definite job' 22%, 'Formal study' 4%, 'Accompany/join' 13%, 'No reason stated' 18%, 'Other' 14%.

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The pie graphs illustrate why people migrated to and from the UK in the year 2007.

Overall, the reasons for immigration and emigration in the UK are particularly: to study formally, to join or accompany, to look for work, and others, while some have no reason. Notably, the majority of individuals went and left for certain employment.

Looking closely, people mainly migrate for their particular job (30%), followed by formal study (26%), to accompany (15%), looking for work (12%), and other reasons(11%). The fewest people(6%) went to the UK without a reason in 2007. For emigration, individuals left the country for their job, finding work, accompaniment, no reason, other reason, and formal study at 29%, 22%, 18%, 14%,13%, and 4% respectively.

Furthermore, almost one-third of the immigrants are for a definite job, and over a quarter are for study abroad. On the other hand, a minority of people migrate for their studies in the UK. Moreover, almost a quarter are employees, and over one-fifth are searching for work.

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Task Response

The report successfully identifies the main features and makes some comparisons between immigration and emigration. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., 'looking for work' for immigration is given as 12% instead of 30%, and 'definite job' for immigration is given as 30% instead of 22%). Additionally, the overview could be more precise by highlighting the most prominent differences, such as the much higher percentage of people emigrating for 'no reason stated' and 'other' reasons compared to immigrants. To improve, ensure data is accurately reported and focus on key contrasts between the two charts.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and a detailed comparison. However, the flow of information could be improved. The second paragraph attempts to present the data but the order of categories is inconsistent with the charts, and the percentages for immigration are incorrectly listed (e.g., 'looking for work' is given as 12% instead of 30%). The third paragraph introduces new comparisons but lacks clear logical progression from the previous paragraph. Using clearer linking words and ensuring a consistent order of data presentation would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'pie graphs' for 'pie charts', 'migrated to and from'). However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'the majority of individuals went and left for certain employment' and 'almost a quarter are employees'. The range of vocabulary is limited, and more precise terms (e.g., 'emigration', 'immigration', 'accompanying family') could be used. To improve, focus on using a wider variety of accurate and natural expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward constructions. For example, 'the reasons for immigration and emigration in the UK are particularly: to study formally...' is ungrammatical, and 'the fewest people(6%) went to the UK without a reason' lacks a space before the bracket. Punctuation is inconsistent (e.g., missing spaces after commas). To improve, ensure subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles, and proper punctuation throughout.

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