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Band 5+: The pie charts show the reasons (visiting friends/family, business, holiday, other) people fly from the airport. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

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The image presents four pie charts illustrating the purposes of travel for passengers at four different airports in 2016. For Gatwick Airport, the reasons were Holiday at 54%, Visiting friends/family at 30%, Business at 14%, and Other at 2%. At Heathrow Airport, the breakdown was Visiting friends/family 37%, Holiday 33%, Business 26%, and Other 4%. For Luton Airport, the purposes were Visiting friends/family 50%, Holiday 35%, Business 13%, and Other 2%. At Stansted Airport, the distribution was Visiting friends/family 48%, Holiday 36%, Business 14%, and Other 2%.

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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of the reasons why people fly from the airport in 2016.

Overall,it is clear that most people are visiting their friends and family,while in Gatwick Airport the number of people’s purpose is holiday.

According to the first chart,in Gatwick Airport the highest reason why people fly is holidays at 54%,while in other airports the percentage of holidays is less than 40%. The second highest reason why people fly from this airport is visiting friends and family at 30%,which compared to other airports has the lowest percentage of this reason. In Luton Airport the majority of passengers’ purpose is visiting friends and family,accounting for 50%,while in Stansted Airport and Heathrow Airport’s passengers take flights for the same reason,it is between 35% and 50%.

The third reason why people travel by air is business and other purposes. Heathrow Airport has the highest percentage by traveling business reason making up 26%. However,in other airports’ passengers flying for this reason is 13-14%. Moreover, other purposes are comprised 2% in three airports,while in Heathrow Airport is accounting for 4%.

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airport: 8

reason: 6

people: 5

other: 5

percentage: 4

visiting: 3

friends: 3

highest: 3

heathrow: 3

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The report adequately covers the main features of the pie charts and makes some comparisons. However, there's room for improvement in terms of providing a more comprehensive overview and ensuring all significant details are addressed. To improve, consider including more specific data points and ensuring a balanced discussion of all airports. Also, focus on making more direct comparisons between the airports to highlight key differences and similarities.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but the flow could be improved. The 'Overall' statement is a good start, but the subsequent paragraphs could benefit from clearer topic sentences and transitions to guide the reader. Consider grouping similar points together and using cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, you could group the discussion of 'Visiting friends/family' across all airports into a single paragraph for better comparison.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. While words like 'percentage,' 'reason,' and 'purpose' are used correctly, try incorporating synonyms or more specific terms to enhance the richness of the language. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'reason,' consider alternatives like 'motivation,' 'cause,' or 'objective.' Also, explore more sophisticated ways to describe proportions and comparisons.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report exhibits a mix of accurate and inaccurate grammatical structures. While some sentences are well-formed, there are noticeable errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and sentence construction. For example, phrases like 'people's purpose is holiday' and 'other purposes are comprised' contain grammatical errors. To improve, focus on proofreading carefully for these common mistakes and practicing a wider range of sentence structures to enhance grammatical flexibility.

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