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Band 5+: The table and bar chart show how journey times in a city centre changed after improvements were made to the transport network,and the cost of using different forms of transport in the city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelent.

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The image includes a table and bar chart for transportation data. The table shows average journey times: Tram, 22 minutes before, 16 minutes after; Bus, 28 minutes before, 23 minutes after; Taxi, 9 minutes before, 12 minutes after; Car, 10 minutes before, 15 minutes after. The bar chart displays average cost per kilometer: Tram, €0.60; Bus, €0.40; Taxi, €1.80; Car, €1.20.

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The table shows the time of the journies in the city using different types of transport before and after the improvements, while the chart shows the cost of those journies for each methods of transport.

Overall, the improvements had decreased puplic transport journies time, while taxis and private cars users will need much time than before the improvements. Regarding the costs, taxis recorded the highest prices, followed by private cars.

Trans journies time increased significantly after the devlopements, which fallen from 22 to 16 minutes. Similarly to trans, buses journies period increased from 28 to 23 minutes. In contrast, taxis and cars recorded rose of journies time, which increased from 9 to 12 minutes, and from 10 to 15 minutes respectively.

Taxis were the most expensive transport method, which recorded more than 1.8 euros, followed by cars with a cost of 1 euros for each journey. In the other hand, trans and buses were the chippest methods of transport, recording 0.5 and 0.4 euros respectively.

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journies: 6

transport: 4

minutes: 4

improvements: 3

taxis: 3

recorded: 3

increased: 3

which: 3

euros: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task and identifies the key trends, such as the decrease in public transport times versus the increase in private transport times. However, there is a significant inaccuracy in the data reporting: the report states that tram journey times 'increased significantly' when the data actually shows they decreased (from 22 to 16 minutes). While the overall trends are captured, these contradictions between the description and the data can confuse the reader. To improve, ensure that the direction of change (increase vs. decrease) is accurately matched to the numbers provided. Additionally, focus on improving spelling (e.g., 'journies', 'puplic', 'trans', 'chippest') and grammatical accuracy to enhance clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, there are significant issues with cohesive devices and logical flow. Some transitions are used incorrectly (e.g., 'Similarly to trans' and 'In the other hand'), which disrupts the reader's ability to follow the argument smoothly. To improve, focus on using standard linking phrases such as 'In contrast,' 'On the other hand,' or 'In comparison' correctly, and ensure that the relationship between sentences is clear.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat limited and contains several spelling errors (e.g., 'journies', 'puplic', 'devlopements', 'trans', 'chippest') and word formation issues (e.g., 'recorded rose of journies time'). There is also some confusion in word choice, such as using 'period' or 'time' in ways that do not sound natural in a technical report. Aim to expand your range of synonyms for 'increase' and 'decrease' and ensure that spelling is accurate to avoid distracting the reader.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and sometimes impede communication. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, tense consistency (switching between past and future), and sentence structure (e.g., 'which fallen from 22 to 16 minutes' is a fragment). Additionally, there are errors in comparative structures (e.g., 'much time than before'). To improve, practice using complex sentence structures like relative clauses and ensure that your verb tenses remain consistent throughout the report.

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