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Band 4+: The table and chart below describe the main results of a survey into how students at an Australian university used online facilities in 2001 and 2002.

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The image presents a table titled 'Student use of online facilities' and a bar chart titled 'Location of computers used by students'. The table shows data for a survey of 1,600 total students each year: in 2001, 1,088 (68%) were students using online facilities and 272 (17%) were students submitting work online; in 2002, 1,540 (96%) were students using online facilities and 1,540 (96%) were students submitting work online. The bar chart displays the number of students for three categories: in 2001, the values were Home 688, University 400, and No computer 512; in 2002, the values were Home 1,250, University 290, and No computer 60.

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The table show how students use online facilities between 2001 and 2002 years in different place of Australia

Overall the chart on top of list describe total student in survey, using online facilities and submitting work online also location of computers used by students with 3 different symbols.

In 2001 year general number of students in survey was 1600 members and students who used online facilities was 1,088(68%) of regional students but woking with computer was really decrease around 272 (17%) after one year, in 2002 the total number of students did not change but students who used computers sharply arose in 1,540 (96%) this result,too influenced to work submitting online, incrised to 1,540 (96%).

The place of using computers was really different in 2001 year home 800, university 400 and students without computer was above of 400, in 2002 all 3 places really had changed abruptly,home around 1200, university under 300 persons and no computer decline under the 200 students.

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students: 9

online: 5

facilities: 3

different: 3

computers: 3

computer: 3

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The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and a lack of clarity. The organization could be improved with a clearer separation of the table and bar chart descriptions. Data reporting contains some inaccuracies. For example, the report states 'home 800' when the visual provides 'Home 688'. To improve, focus on accurate data representation, clearer structure, and more precise language.

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The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The introduction is weak and doesn't effectively summarise the content. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions, making it difficult to follow the main points. The organisation of information could be improved by grouping related data together and presenting it in a more coherent manner. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and sentences together.

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The report demonstrates a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies and inappropriate word choices. There is a reliance on simple vocabulary and a lack of more sophisticated or precise language. The use of synonyms and paraphrasing could be improved to avoid repetition and enhance the overall quality of the writing. Pay attention to using vocabulary that is appropriate for academic writing.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. These errors significantly affect the clarity and accuracy of the writing. There is a limited range of grammatical structures used, and the control of grammar is weak. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules, and practice using a wider range of sentence structures.

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Band 4+: The table and chart below describe the main results of a survey into how students at an Australian university used online facilities in 2001 and 2002.

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