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Band 5+: The table below describes the proportion of smokers in males and females (between the age of 15 and 20) in Britain. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a table detailing smoker proportions among British males and females aged 15-20 from 1970 to 2000; for males: 1970 at 10%, 1975 at 22%, 1980 at 35%, 1985 at 37%, 1990 at 36%, 1995 at 30%, 2000 at 28%; for females: 1970 at 5%, 1975 at 13%, 1980 at 22%, 1985 at 34%, 1990 at 37%, 1995 at 32%, 2000 at 27%.

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The table chart below illustrates the percentage of smokers in males and females according to the different age groups in Britain over the period from 1970 to 2000.

In general, it can be seen that females percentage of smoking were slightly exceeded male smokers, except of two period of time when the situation was reversed.

period from 1985 to 1990saw a dramatic increase of figures oof the smokers, which percentage made it to 37 per cent by males in 1985 and the same pattern accomplished by females in 1990. While the lowest proportion of smokers found among womens in 1970 which accounted just 5 per cent, whereaes mens demonstrated only 10 per cent, Between 1990 and 1995 there were slight change, females were outnumbered males by the proportion. The difference between two genders stood at only 1 per cent in 1990, wheraes in 1995 this figure stoood at 2 per cent.

In sharp contrast to 1975 and 1980, the percentages of female smokers were significantly lower than those of males standing at 13 per cent and 22 per cent respectively. While 2000 showed only a 1 per cent difference between the two genders.

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smokers: 5

males: 4

females: 4

percentage: 3

between: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task and identifies key trends, such as the rise and fall of smoking proportions. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity. The overview contains a factual error regarding which gender had higher proportions, and the description of the trends is sometimes confusing due to grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, ensure that comparisons between genders are clearly stated and that the relationship between the data points is logically organized. Focus on improving sentence structure and grammatical accuracy to ensure the mathematical comparisons (e.g., 'outnumbered' or 'exceeded') are used correctly and clearly.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of ideas is somewhat disjointed, making the progression of information difficult to follow at times. While there is an attempt to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'In general', 'In sharp contrast'), they are often used incorrectly or are accompanied by grammatical errors that disrupt the flow. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that transitions between sentences are logical and smooth. Avoid starting sentences with 'While' if they are not followed by a main clause, as this creates sentence fragments.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary range is limited and there are several instances of incorrect word choices and word forms (e.g., 'womens', 'mens', 'females percentage', 'outnumbered males by the proportion'). There are also several spelling errors ('oof', 'wheraes', 'stoood'). To improve, focus on learning the correct plural forms of irregular nouns and practice using collocations related to data description (e.g., 'the proportion of females' instead of 'females percentage').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the clarity of the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement ('females percentage... were'), sentence structure (fragmented sentences), and tense consistency. Many sentences are run-on or improperly constructed, which forces the reader to re-read for meaning. To improve, work on mastering basic sentence structures, particularly the use of subordinate clauses, and ensure that every sentence has a clear subject and a matching verb.

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