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Band 4+: The table below gives information about the use of different modes of transport in Shanghai in 1996, and one possible prejection (high motorisation scenario) for their use in 2020.

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The image presents a table comparing the percentage of passenger kilometers by transport modes in Shanghai for 1996 and the projected 2020: Walking 1996 - 7%, 2020 - 3%; Bicycle 1996 - 27%, 2020 - 3%; Scooter 1996 - 12%, 2020 - 7%; Bus 1996 - 39%, 2020 - 22%; Train 1996 - not listed, 2020 - 13%; Car 1996 - 15%, 2020 - 52%.

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The chart show me percentage of passenger kilometres by different modes of transport in shanghai. from 1996 to 2020 projection.

Overall, there are six mode of transport, I will start with walking then cycle, scooter, bus, train and the last one is the vehicle.

Out of the the six mode of transport, the highest percentage of this figure in 1996, First are the bus with 39%. secoundly are the cycle have got 27% and the vehicle have 15%. finaly, walking have got 7% and its the last one in 1996.

On the other hand, It can be seen in 2020 the highest percentage, Is the car and it have got 52%. Secoundly , bus and train they have used in shanghhi more but the bus has got 22% and the train got 13%. The lowest percentage in 2020 is had for walking ans bicycle in futuer humans will never rode bike that what i think .

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The report attempts to address the task but contains significant issues. The organization is somewhat present, but the writing lacks precision and clarity. There are noticeable grammatical errors and awkward phrasing throughout the report. The report includes some irrelevant commentary ('humans will never rode bike that what i think'). To improve, focus on using more precise language, structuring the report into clear paragraphs with specific points, and avoiding personal opinions.

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The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The introduction is weak, and the body paragraphs jump between details without clear transitions. The 'overall' statement is vague and doesn't provide a strong overview. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively separate ideas. Improve coherence by using clear topic sentences, transitional phrases, and a more structured approach to comparing the data. The final sentence introduces a personal opinion, which is inappropriate for this task.

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The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There's a reliance on simple words like 'have got' and 'the last one.' The range of vocabulary is limited, and there's little evidence of sophisticated word choice. To improve, try to use synonyms and more precise language to describe the data. For example, instead of 'the highest percentage,' consider using 'the largest proportion' or 'the most significant share.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('chart show me'), subject-verb agreement issues ('cycle have got'), and incorrect word usage ('secoundly,' 'finaly'). Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Punctuation is also inconsistent. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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