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Band 5+: The table below shows the changes in the percentage of lawyers choosing jobs in different industries in a specific country from 2001 to 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a table comparing the percentage of male and female lawyers choosing job industries in 2001 and 2016, detailing: in 2001, private lawyer roles attracted 15% male and 17% female, business sectors had 14% male and 14% female, government roles drew 25% male and 23% female, other categories hosted 26% male and 29% female; in 2016, private lawyer percentages increased to 19% male and 21% female, business sectors observed a rise to 21% male and 24% female, government roles decreased to 24% male and 21% female, while other categories fell to 22% male and 16% female.

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The table gives information about lawyers choosing employment in different industries for both genders in specific country from 2001 to 2016. The measures are given in perecentages.

Overall, it is noticable that for both genders government job was more common, whereas the least popular job was business in both years.

It is evidental that the vast majority of lawyers choosed the government job in both years, regardless their gender identity. However, in 2001 the perecentage of men choosing the given job is slightly higher than that for women, 45% and 41% respectively. Therefor the picture changed in 2016 with women dominating in that field, with 42% and men 38%.

As for private lawyer position in 2001 men figure was slightly higer than that for women, with 2% difference, but in 2016 women surpassed men, reaching 21%. Business position for men and women were identical, they were sharing the same perecentage at 14%, however in 2016 women were 7% higher. The others position were high for both gender, therefor female figure decreased 12% compared with 2001.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but there are several inaccuracies and omissions. The overall statement incorrectly identifies government as the most popular and business as the least popular, which is not supported by the data (other categories had higher percentages in 2001). The figures for government jobs are misreported (45% and 41% instead of 25% and 23% in 2001; 38% and 42% instead of 24% and 21% in 2016). The comparison for private lawyer jobs is somewhat accurate, but the business sector figures are not fully described (missing the increase for men). The report also omits specific data for the 'other' category in 2016 and makes an unclear comparison. To improve, ensure that the overview accurately reflects the main trends, and include precise data for all categories, making clear comparisons between years and genders.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'the given job' is vague, and the shift from discussing government jobs to other categories is not smooth. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. Additionally, use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') to link sentences and ideas more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there are several inaccuracies and limited range. Words like 'perecentages' (percentages), 'noticable' (noticeable), 'evidental' (evident), and 'higer' (higher) are misspelled. Also, phrases such as 'the vast majority' and 'dominating' are used, but more precise and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'a significant proportion', 'outnumbered', 'accounted for') would enhance the report. Avoid informal expressions like 'the picture changed' and use more formal academic language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include subject-verb agreement ('the perecentage of men choosing the given job is slightly higher' should be 'are'), incorrect verb forms ('choosed' should be 'chose'), and missing articles ('in specific country' should be 'in a specific country'). There are also punctuation issues, such as missing commas and incorrect use of 'therefor' (should be 'therefore'). To improve, review basic grammar rules, practice using a variety of sentence structures, and proofread carefully to eliminate errors.

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