Band 6+: the table below shows the number of new buildings in america in three separate years

The report addresses the task by describing the overall trend and providing some specific data. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the statement that factories increased the most is correct, but the report incorrectly states that warehouses had the least increase (actually shops had the least increase at 8.3%, while warehouses increased by 8.3% as well, but the report says 'least amount of increase' which is ambiguous). Additionally, the report omits data for shops and warehouses in the detailed description, and there are minor spelling errors ('seperate', 'darastically', 'buuildings', 'warhouses'). The structure is clear with an overview and body paragraphs, but the data presentation could be more precise and comprehensive. To improve, ensure all categories are covered and data is accurately reported, and proofread for spelling and grammar. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by abrupt transitions and a lack of clear paragraphing. For example, the second paragraph mixes information about factories, other buildings, and houses without a clear focus. To improve, consider dedicating each paragraph to a specific aspect, such as one for the highest increases and another for the lowest, and use cohesive devices like 'in contrast' or 'similarly' to link ideas smoothly.

The vocabulary is adequate but limited in range and precision. Words like 'increased' are repeated, and there are some inaccuracies such as 'darastically' (should be 'drastically') and 'buuildings' (should be 'buildings'). To achieve a higher score, use a wider variety of synonyms (e.g., 'rose', 'climbed', 'surged') and more precise terms (e.g., 'experienced the most significant growth'). Also, ensure correct spelling and word forms.

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For instance, 'has increased for all type of building' should be 'has increased for all types of buildings', and 'the number of houses has been th highest' contains a typo. Additionally, some sentences are run-ons or lack proper punctuation. To improve, proofread carefully, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use a variety of sentence structures with accurate punctuation.