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Band 5+: The table below shows the result of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.

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The image is a table showing participation in cultural activities by age, with the columns being age groups 16-24, 25-44, 45-74, and all aged 16 and over, and the rows being activities like any performance (35%, 22%, 17%, 22%), undertaking any crafts (11%, 17%, 22%, 19%), cultural purchases (11%, 17%, 18%, 16%), any visual arts (30%, 16%, 11%, 15%), any writing (17%, 6%, 5%, 7%) and computer-based (10%, 9%, 5%, 6%).

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The data provides information whether 6800 Scottish individual aged 16 years and over has participated in cultural events from last one year.

Overall, performance and visual arts had the highest involvement compared to other type of activities.

The largest participation was seen in the age group of 16-24 with 35% and 30% respectively doing performance and visual arts. In contrast, other activities were much lower, particularly computer based at 10%. Now moving ahead to much older groups, specifically from 25-44 years, the major percentage is covered by performance with 22% and undertaking any craft and cultural purchases were at similar mark of 17%.

The remaining age group of 45–74, the least popular kind of event is computer which stood at 5% and writing also displaying the same trend like computer. However, the most famous activity was undertaking any craft with 22%. In 16 and above age group, the involvement of computer was 6% and writing was one more than computer.

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computer: 5

performance: 3

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Task Response

The report provides a good overview of the main features of the data, but it could be more detailed and analytical. For example, it could mention the overall trend of decreasing participation with age for most activities, and it could make more specific comparisons between the different age groups.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally coherent, but the flow of ideas could be improved. The use of transition words and phrases could help to connect the different parts of the report more smoothly.

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The report uses a good range of vocabulary, but it could be more precise and varied. For example, the report could use more specific words to describe the different cultural activities.

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The report contains a number of grammatical errors, which affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. The report could benefit from more careful proofreading and editing.

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The table below shows the result of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.

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