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Band 4+: The table below shows the total number of US cruisepassengers in 1995 and 2005. The chart shows thepercentage of different age groups who bought trave!insurance.Summarize the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisonswhere relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows a table and a chart. The table lists the total number of US cruise passengers as 397,837 in 1995 and 3,569,251 in 2005. The chart shows the percentage of different age groups who bought travel insurance for those two years. In 1995, the percentages were: 18-28 (2%), 29-39 (5%), 40-50 (10%), 51-61 (12%), 62-72 (28%), and 73-83 (38%). In 2005, the percentages were: 18-28 (10%), 29-39 (14%), 40-50 (20%), 51-61 (25%), 62-72 (35%), and 73-83 (50%).

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The table below showed the total number of US cruise passengers in 1995 and 2005 and the chart showed the percentage of different age groups who bought travel insurance.

Overall, the changes in total number of US cruise passengers and the percentage of different age groups showed a difference in 1995 and 2005.

The total number of US cruise a show a dramatical increase from 397,631 in 1995 to 3,562,251 in 2005. It means there were much people choose the US cruise to travel to other places.

The percentage of different age groups from 18-28 years old to 73-83 years old all showed a slight rise. For example, there was a slow increase in the percentage of 18-28 age group from 5% in 1995 to 10% in 2005.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

showed: 4

cruise: 4

percentage: 4

total: 3

number: 3

different: 3

groups: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task but lacks detail and accuracy. The description of the cruise passenger numbers is adequate, but the analysis of the age group percentages is superficial and contains inaccuracies (e.g., stating 5% for the 18-28 age group in 1995 when it was 2%). To improve, provide more specific data points and comparisons, and ensure accuracy in reporting the numbers. Also, aim for a more structured and coherent presentation of the information. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has some coherence issues. The introduction is a restatement of the prompt. The overview is very general and doesn't provide specific insights. The organization is basic, with a paragraph for the table and another for the chart. To improve coherence, provide a clearer overview with specific trends and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect of the data. Use cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Words like 'dramatical' and 'slight rise' are not used accurately. To enhance lexical resource, use a wider range of vocabulary to describe trends and data, such as 'significant increase,' 'modest growth,' or 'substantial difference.' Focus on using synonyms and more specific terms to convey information effectively. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'The total number of US cruise a show a dramatical increase' has subject-verb agreement and article issues. To improve grammatical accuracy, review basic grammar rules, especially subject-verb agreement, article usage, and tense consistency. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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