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Band 7+: The table compares the international tourist arrivals in millions in 9 countries in 2009 and 2010 and the changes (in percentages). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a table titled 'The International tourist arrivals in millions in 9 countries in 2009 and 2010 and the changes.' The data for tourist arrivals in millions for 2009, 2010, and the corresponding change are listed for nine countries, respectively: France (76, 76, +0), US (66, 67, +1.5%), Spain (55, 56, +1.8%), UK (55, 57, +3.6%), Italy (44, 45, +2.3%), Turkey (33, 45, +33%), China (22, 34, +55%), Germany (11, 23, +109%), and Hong Kong (10, 9, -11%).

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The table illustrates the number of international tourists arriving in nine distinct countries in 2009 and 2010 as well as the recorded percentage changes.

Overall, the vast majority of countries experienced an increase, except France where numbers remained the same and Hong Kong being the only country that saw a decline. France had the highest quantity of tourists in both years, while change in Germany was the most drastic one.

In both 2009 and 2010, France was the most visited destination among tourists, maintaining a stable figure of 76 million. United States ranked the second, with 66 and 67 million in 2009 and 2010 respectively, indicating 1.5% change. Spain experienced a modest change of 1.8%, (from 55 million to 56 million). Rates of international visitors in United Kingdom constituted 55 million in 2009 and increased by 3.6% in the following year (57 million)

The figure for tourists who visited Turkey as a destination country made up 33 million in 2009 and 45 million in 2010, recording 33% growth. The change of 55% was recorded in China, where quantity of tourist was 22 million in 2009 and 34 million in 2010. The most dramatic change (109%) was recorder in Germany, it changed from 11 millions in 2009 to 23millions in 2010. The only country that recorded a decrease was Hong Kong, the numbers dropped from 10 million to 9 million , marking a 11% change.

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by presenting the main features and making relevant comparisons. It clearly identifies the overall trend (most countries increased, France stable, Hong Kong declined) and highlights key data points such as France's highest numbers and Germany's largest change. The data is mostly accurate, with minor omissions (e.g., Italy's figures) and a few minor inaccuracies (e.g., 'recorder' instead of 'recorded', and slight awkward phrasing). The structure is logical, with a clear overview and detailed paragraphs. To improve, ensure all countries are mentioned and refine language for precision and flow.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear overall statement and a division into two main paragraphs. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between the first and second body paragraphs, and some sentences could be more smoothly linked. The use of cohesive devices is generally effective but occasionally repetitive. To improve, consider using a wider range of linking words and ensuring each paragraph has a clear central focus.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and mostly accurate, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'illustrates', 'recorded percentage changes', 'most visited destination'). However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'the change in Germany was the most drastic one' and 'the numbers dropped'. To achieve a higher score, aim for more precise and natural word choices, and avoid repetition of 'change' and 'recorded'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are several errors that affect clarity and accuracy. For example, 'France where numbers remained the same and Hong Kong being the only country' is a fragment, and 'it changed from 11 millions to 23millions' contains errors in plural and spacing. Additionally, there are punctuation issues, such as missing commas and incorrect use of parentheses. To improve, focus on sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and careful proofreading for punctuation and spelling.

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