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Band 7+: The table details the international tourist arrivals in million in 8 countries in 2009 and 2010 and the changes (in percentages) Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison were relevant.

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The image presents a table of international tourist arrivals (millions) for eight countries in 2009 and 2010, with percentage changes: France 76 (2009) to 76 (2010), 0% change; US 66 to 67, 1.5% increase; Spain 55 to 56, 1.8% increase; UK 55 to 57, 3.6% increase; Italy 44 to 45, 2.3% increase; Turkey 33 to 43, 33% increase; China 22 to 34, 55% increase; Germany 11 to 23, 109% increase; Hong Kong 10 to 9, -11% decrease.

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The chart illustrates the proportion of the international tourist in the eight particular states and the change during the period in 2009 and 2010.

Overall, the given countries experienced upward trend, with the expectation of France and Hong Kong. It is also clear that the biggest growth was observed in Germany.

In 2009, the number of arriving international tourist in France was at 76 million, followed by the US the at 66 million, while in Spain and UK the figures were similar, reaching 55 million. In Italy, in 2009, the amount of tourist accounts for 44 million, whereas in Turkey, China, Hong Kong and Germany this figures stood at 33, 22, 10 and 11 million respectively.

In 2010, France remain unchanged. However US changed from 66 to 67 million. In Spain and the UK the figures were quiet similar, both of them changed by 1.8% and 3.6%. By contrast, the proportion in Italy changed to 2.3%, while In Turkey the change accounted for 33%, followed by China and Germany were change reached for 55% and 109%. Nevertheless, Hong Kong witnessed an downward trend decreasing from 10 to 9 million.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

million: 7

tourist: 3

change: 3

france: 3

figures: 3

changed: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and provides relevant data from the table. However, there is room for improvement in terms of organization and specific language use. To improve, focus on grouping countries with similar trends together in paragraphs to enhance coherence. Also, vary your language to describe changes (e.g., instead of always saying 'changed to,' use 'increased to,' 'rose to,' or 'experienced a growth of').

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized, with a clear introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, transitions between some sentences and ideas could be smoother to enhance the flow. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to connect ideas more effectively. For example, in the third paragraph, you could use phrases like 'Similarly' or 'Likewise' to link the data for Spain and the UK more explicitly. Also, avoid starting multiple sentences in a row with 'In' as it can become repetitive.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and generally appropriate for the task. However, there's room to enhance the lexical range by using more varied and precise language. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'change,' consider synonyms like 'increase,' 'decrease,' 'growth,' or 'fluctuation,' depending on the context. Also, the phrase 'upward trend' is a bit general; you could specify 'significant upward trends' or 'moderate increases' to provide more detail. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar, with mostly accurate sentence structures and punctuation. However, there are a few minor errors that need attention. For example, 'the expectation of France and Hong Kong' should be 'with the exception of France and Hong Kong.' Also, 'tourist accounts for' should be 'tourists accounted for'. Reviewing and correcting these small errors will improve the overall grammatical accuracy.

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