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Band 5+: The table details the international tourist arrivals in million in 8 countries in 2009 and 2010 and the changes (in percentages) Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison were relevant.

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The image presents a table of international tourist arrivals (millions) for eight countries in 2009 and 2010, with percentage changes: France 76 (2009) to 76 (2010), 0% change; US 66 to 67, 1.5% increase; Spain 55 to 56, 1.8% increase; UK 55 to 57, 3.6% increase; Italy 44 to 45, 2.3% increase; Turkey 33 to 43, 33% increase; China 22 to 34, 55% increase; Germany 11 to 23, 109% increase; Hong Kong 10 to 9, -11% decrease.

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The table compares information about the number of international tourist arrivals in different countries in 2009 and 2010 , with their percentage changes.

Overall, all countries in question witnessed an increase of varying degrees in their tourist arrivals, with the exception of France that saw no change at all. Although, Hong Kong experienced decrease in the end of the period.

Turkey, China and especially Germany increased their tourist arrivals dramatically within one years. The former country stood out by charging the most tourist arrivals, at 33 million which rose to 45 by 2010, recording a change of 33%. However, it was Germany where the biggest change of 109% occured, with the international tourist arrivals hiking from 11 million in 2009 to 34 in 2010. Although, China stood at 22 million tourist arrivals in 2009, by 2010 the number of tourist arrivals went up 34 million with 55%.

The remaining countries, on the other hand, experienced sharply increase or decrease. Among those, America, Spain, UK,Italy experienced a sharp rise, with the number of tourists escalating from 66 million, 55, 55,44 and 67 million, 56,57,45 respectively. The percentage of this countries ranged from 1.5% to 2.3%. Conversly, the only country that saw no change is that France, in 2009 it is the most popular and in the end of the year it is recorded similar number of tourist arrivals with 76 million. On the other hand, Hong Kong experienced decrease at about 9 million in 2010, with the 11%.

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tourist: 8

arrivals: 8

million: 8

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countries: 4

change: 4

experienced: 4

their: 3

decrease: 3

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The report covers the main trends and makes relevant comparisons, but there are some inaccuracies in the data reported. For example, the report states that Turkey rose to 45 million, but the table shows 43 million. Also, the report states that Germany rose to 34 million, but the table shows 23 million. The report also states that Turkey stood out by charging the most tourist arrivals, but France had the most tourist arrivals. To improve, ensure that the data reported is accurate and that the comparisons made are relevant.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize information, but the flow is disrupted by several issues. The 'Overall' paragraph is acceptable, but subsequent paragraphs suffer from a lack of clear topic sentences and logical progression. Transitions between sentences and ideas are sometimes abrupt, making it harder for the reader to follow the comparisons and trends. Paragraphing could be improved by grouping countries with similar trends together and providing clearer transitions between these groups. For example, the paragraph discussing Turkey, China, and Germany could be more focused, and the subsequent paragraph could start with a clearer transition to the countries with smaller increases.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary, but there are instances of imprecise word choice and awkward phrasing. For example, 'charging the most tourist arrivals' is not idiomatic. The report would benefit from using more varied and precise language to describe the changes and comparisons. Consider using synonyms for 'increase' and 'decrease' and finding more accurate ways to describe the magnitude of the changes. For example, instead of 'sharply increase or decrease,' use more specific terms like 'modestly increased' or 'slightly decreased.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors and inaccuracies are frequent and impact clarity. There are issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, article usage, and preposition choice. For example, 'Hong Kong experienced decrease' should be 'Hong Kong experienced a decrease,' and 'the former country stood out by charging the most tourist arrivals' contains awkward phrasing and incorrect word usage. Correcting these errors and paying closer attention to grammatical accuracy would significantly improve the report's overall quality.

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