Band 4+: the table show the percentage of land area covered by forest in 7 countries in 1990 and 2000

The report appropriately addresses the task by presenting the main features of the data for all seven countries. It correctly identifies the highest and lowest values and provides specific figures for most countries. However, there are some omissions and lapses: the data for Portugal is not specified, and the phrasing for New Zealand is slightly unclear. Additionally, there are minor grammatical and spelling errors (e.g., 'Wheareas', 'aboutabout', 'amounted'). To improve, ensure all data points are clearly stated and proofread for accuracy and clarity. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

The report has a logical structure, but the flow is disrupted by awkward phrasing and punctuation errors. The first paragraph introduces the topic, and the second paragraph presents the data, but the transitions between ideas are not smooth. For example, the use of 'Wheareas' and 'Turning to the further details' is abrupt. The report would benefit from clearer topic sentences and more cohesive devices to link the data points. Additionally, the final sentence is incomplete and lacks a clear conclusion. To improve, consider organizing the information into clear paragraphs with a logical progression, and use linking words such as 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' and 'Overall' to guide the reader.

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary, such as 'illustrates,' 'proportion,' and 'approximately,' but there are several issues. The phrase 'the country which covered the highest proportion of land' is repetitive and could be more concise. There are also errors like 'Wheareas' (instead of 'Whereas') and 'aboutabout' (a typo). The range of vocabulary is limited, and the report lacks sophistication. To improve, use a wider variety of synonyms (e.g., 'accounted for,' 'represented,' 'constituted') and ensure correct spelling. Also, avoid informal or incorrect phrases like 'the land least covered by Singapore' - instead, say 'Singapore had the lowest forest cover.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

The report contains several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'which was amounted' is incorrect (should be 'which amounted to'), and 'the land least covered by Singapore' is awkward. There are also missing commas and incorrect use of 'while' and 'in addition.' The sentence 'In addition, the New Zealand covered land in both years was aboutabout 31% and 35% respectively' is grammatically incorrect and incomplete. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct verb forms, and proper sentence structure. Use a variety of complex sentences, but ensure they are grammatically accurate. Proofreading for punctuation and typos is essential.