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Band 5+: The table shows a breakdown of the most popular languages taken by native English speakers studying at the UK Centre for Foreign Language Learning in 2020.The table highlights information about the percentage of English native speaking men and women who chose to study one of nine foreign languages at a foreign language school in the UK in the year 2020.

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There are many languages around the world that is very interesting to be learned. In the UK, there are a lot of people who studied in the foreign languages at a foreign language school in the UK in the year 2020. There are nine foreign languages that was the most popular among the students. However the most popular foreign languages between women and men students are different.

To begin with, the most popular foreign languages that was taken by the women students is Mandarin. Mandarin listed as the most difficult languages for English speakers due to its tonal system where a word’s meaning changes with pitch. There are 27% of English native speaking women students who studied Mandarin in 2020. Meanwhile men students who studied this language is 14%. The second most popular language learned by women students is Spanish with 19%.

On the other hand, the least popular foreign languages that was taken by the women students is Italian and the least popular foreign languages that was taken by is Polish.

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languages: 8

foreign: 7

students: 7

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women: 5

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mandarin: 3

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The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, but it is incomplete and contains some irrelevant information. The introduction is too general and doesn't focus specifically on the data provided. The report only covers Mandarin and Spanish in detail for women, and only mentions Italian and Polish as the least popular without providing the corresponding data. To improve, ensure that all key features of the table are discussed, including the data for men and a more comprehensive comparison of the languages. Also, avoid including general statements not directly related to the data.

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The report lacks a clear overview statement in the introduction. The organization is somewhat present but could be improved by grouping languages based on popularity among men and women or by comparing specific languages directly. The final paragraph is abrupt and lacks detail. Consider adding transitions between paragraphs to improve flow.

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The vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied and precise. The language used is generally appropriate, but there's room to incorporate more sophisticated vocabulary related to language learning and statistics. For example, instead of 'very interesting to be learned,' consider 'highly sought after' or 'increasingly popular.' Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

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The report contains several grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement issues ('languages around the world that is') and incorrect verb tenses ('languages that was the most popular'). Sentence structure is also somewhat simple and repetitive. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in verb tenses and subject-verb agreement.

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