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Band 5+: The tables and pie chart show in percentage terms of the results of a survey of a new shopping complex in Auckland, New Zealand. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » You should write at least 150 words.

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The image includes two tables and a pie chart. Table 1: male (shoppers 17, very satisfied 45, satisfied 20, dissatisfied 18, no comment 9), female (shoppers 34, very satisfied 37, satisfied 20, dissatisfied 9, no comment 9). Table 2: male (shoppers 25, very satisfied 55, satisfied 5, dissatisfied 15, no comment 15), female (shoppers 27, very satisfied 32, satisfied 21, dissatisfied 20, no comment 20). Pie chart for reactions shows satisfied 62%, very satisfied 17%, dissatisfied 11%, no comment 10%.

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The tables and pie chart illustrate the results of a satisfaction survey conduct on a new shopping complex in Auckland, New Zealand. The survey focused on three specific aspects, shops, restaurants and overall design of the complex.

Overall, men generally were more satisfied with restaurants, whereas women showed greater satisfaction with shops.In addition the majority of people were satisfied with the design of the shopping centre.

To begin with , female shoppers were much more positive than males with shops, 34% choosing very satisfied compared to only 17% of men. However more men 45% were satisfied than women 37%.Exactly 20% of both males and females were dissatisfied, while 18 men and by half women were no comments. In terms of restaurants, men were very satisfied with 25% and women at 27% respectively. 55% men were satisfied which was higher ratio compared to all survey results and 32% women were satisfied. Only 5% men were dissatisfied with the restaurants and three fold women were dissatisfied. Moreover 15% men and 20% women were left no comments.

On the other hand, majority of people satisfied with design of complex at 62%, while 17% very satisfied. In contrast one tenth were no satisfied and no comment about the design of complex.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

satisfied: 10

women: 7

restaurants: 4

design: 4

survey: 3

complex: 3

dissatisfied: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task and identifies key trends, such as the differences in satisfaction levels between genders and the overall design preference. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity that hinder the overall quality. Some figures are misinterpreted or presented in a confusing manner (e.g., the distinction between 'satisfied' and 'very satisfied' becomes blurred in the text), and some comparisons are mathematically unclear. To improve, ensure that every data point mentioned is clearly linked to its specific category and that the distinction between the different levels of satisfaction is maintained consistently throughout the report. Aim for greater precision in how percentages are reported to avoid ambiguity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes interrupted by awkward phrasing and punctuation errors. For example, the lack of spacing after periods and commas makes the text harder to follow. To improve, ensure that cohesive devices (like 'In addition' or 'On the other hand') are used naturally and that sentences are clearly separated to guide the reader through your comparisons.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is sufficient to convey the basic meaning, but there is a lack of variety and precision. There are several instances of incorrect word forms (e.g., 'conduct' instead of 'conducted', 'no satisfied' instead of 'not satisfied') and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'three fold women were dissatisfied'). To reach a higher band, aim to use more sophisticated synonyms for 'satisfied' or 'dissatisfied' and ensure that comparative structures (e.g., 'a higher proportion of...') are used accurately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede communication. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and sentence structure (e.g., '18 men and by half women were no comments'). Additionally, the use of articles and prepositions is inconsistent. I recommend focusing on mastering complex sentence structures and ensuring that every sentence has a clear subject and verb. Pay close attention to how you integrate data into your sentences to avoid fragmented thoughts.

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