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Band 4+: The tables below give the distribution of world population in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image presents tables showing world population distribution for the years 1950, 2000, and estimated for 2050: World population in billions - 1950: 2.5, 2000: 6.0, 2050 (estimate): 9.0; Distribution by Region - Africa: 1950: 9%, 2000: 13%, 2050: 20%; Asia: 1950: 56%, 2000: 60%, 2050: 59%; Europe: 1950: 22%, 2000: 12%, 2050: 7%; Latin America: 1950: 6%, 2000: 9%, 2050: 9%; North America: 1950: 7%, 2000: 5%, 2050: 4%; Oceania: 1950: <1%, 2000: 1%, 2050: 1%.

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The table illustrates about the distribuiton of world population of 3 decades which is 1950, 2000 and 2050.

The world population in Aisa was 56% more than the other countries such as Europe has second largest population with 22% after that Africa with 9%, North America with 7%, Latin America with 6% and lastly, Oceania with 1%.

As the year passed we have seen that there is an increase in population in some countries like Asia and Africa rose by 4% while some countries like Europe and North America decreased by 3% of their population meanwhile Oceania remained the same in the year 2000s.

In 2050, some courtries mionr portion fell specifically countries like Aisa, Europe and North America on the other hand some countries population slightly jumped up to 7% like Africa. However, some remained constant like Latin America and Oceania remained same upto 9% and 1% only.

For the conclusion, Countries like Africa, Aisa and Eupore has flucated drastically meanwhlie some rose as the years increased while some remained constant through out the 1950 to 2050

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population: 6

countries: 6

america: 5

africa: 4

remained: 4

europe: 3

north: 3

oceania: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by presenting some data from the tables, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. Key figures are misreported (e.g., Asia's 2000 population is stated as 60% but described as a 4% increase, which is correct, but the 2050 estimate for Asia is incorrectly described as falling; Europe's 2050 estimate is 7%, but the report says it decreased by 3% from 2000, which is correct, but the overall trend is not clearly summarized). The report also includes irrelevant or unclear statements (e.g., 'flucated drastically') and fails to make clear comparisons across all regions. The structure is somewhat disorganized, and there are numerous spelling and grammatical errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the main trends, making clear comparisons, and ensuring the report is well-organized and error-free.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information chronologically, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. The introduction is vague, and the conclusion is repetitive and lacks a clear summary of key trends. Paragraphing is not effectively managed, and the use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate. To improve, use clear topic sentences, logical sequencing of data, and appropriate linking words to guide the reader smoothly through the report.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive, with limited range and flexibility. There are several spelling errors (e.g., 'distribuiton', 'Aisa', 'Eupore', 'flucated', 'meanwhlie', 'through out') and inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'illustrates about', 'mionr portion'). To enhance lexical resource, use a wider variety of precise terms related to data description (e.g., 'accounted for', 'constituted', 'experienced a rise/decline', 'remained stable') and ensure correct spelling and word formation.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement issues (e.g., 'has flucated', 'has second largest'), incorrect verb tenses, and awkward phrasing. Punctuation is often missing or misused, and sentence structures are repetitive and lack complexity. To improve, focus on using a variety of sentence structures (e.g., complex and compound sentences) and ensure grammatical accuracy, particularly in subject-verb agreement and tense consistency. Proofreading for punctuation and clarity is also essential.

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