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Band 4+: The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes which occurred. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows two pie charts detailing energy sources in the USA for 1980 and 1990. In 1980: Oil 42%, Natural Gas (NG) 26%, Coal 22%, Nuclear Power (NP) 6%, Hydroelectric Power (HP) 4%. In 1990: Oil 33%, Natural Gas 25%, Coal 27%, Nuclear Power 10%, Hydroelectric Power 5%.

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The photo shows the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s.

In 1980 the oil rising very well, but after 10 years the oil decreased, i think this metter unhealthy for the country because without oil our country didnt have some succesful and also the people. The nature gas growing only 1 percent after 10 years, it can be useful for our air pollution, nature gas is very important. Fortunely, the coal was surging a little after 10 years this resource also helpful because without coal we dont have any energy and other.

The hydroelectric power balanced , this resource didnt rising, but the nuclear power was growing only 5 percent. This powers very essential for our country in order to bring some power for instance, without powers we dont have any electr, light.

In my opinion every resources have their benefits also without this item we dont live what we want.

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the changes in energy sources but includes irrelevant personal opinions and speculations about the impact of these changes on the country. The language is also quite basic and repetitive. To improve, focus on objectively describing the data and avoid personal opinions. Use more precise language and a wider range of vocabulary to discuss the changes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a coherent manner, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs are weak. The report would benefit from a clearer structure, such as grouping information by energy source or by trend (increase/decrease). Avoid introducing personal opinions ('I think') as this is an academic report.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of specific terminology related to energy sources and trends. The report would be improved by using a wider range of vocabulary to describe changes and comparisons, such as 'increased significantly,' 'remained stable,' or 'experienced a slight decline.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('oil rising'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impede understanding. Focus on improving basic grammar and sentence construction to enhance clarity.

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