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Band 4+: The two maps below a TV centered ten years ago and now.

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The image shows two floor plans. The left plan includes: cameras, editing room, desk 1 for studio, cameras, reception, main entrance, car parking, office 2, corridor, office 3, editing room, desk 2 for studio, and houses and weather. The right plan labeled "TV Centre Today" includes: cameras, storage room, studio, desk 1 for studio, main entrance, car parking, office 3, office 2, making up room, office 1, desk 2 for studio, houses and weather, editing room, and reception.

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The two maps show a TV centered ten years ago and present day.

Overall, it is evident that in ten years ago and nowadays have a more changes. Reported significantly seven spaces changed and to be more a new places.

Reseption in ten years ago and niw remained unchange and also it office 2 but, instead canteen to become office 1. Further, in ten years ago office had a consistent vast it. It is changed canteen and it is become large as a old office 1. The recorden tourm had a improved on office 3 and waiting area were unchanged.

Moreover, clothing rooms were not improve in 10 years and now. However, dress store wasn’t enhace on the new space. In 10 yeras ago, recorden tourm had a moved to instead office 3, also, studio also unchanged. Finally, customer service room and male up room weren’t modify in during the ten years.

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years: 6

office: 6

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the changes between the two maps, but it suffers from several issues that affect its clarity and coherence. The organization is not very logical, and the description of changes is sometimes confusing and inaccurate. The language used contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, making it difficult to understand the relationships between the different areas of the TV center. To improve, focus on organizing the information more clearly, using more accurate and specific language, and proofreading carefully for grammatical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The information is not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the changes described in the maps. Paragraphing is weak, and the connections between sentences and ideas are often unclear. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and create a smoother flow. For example, use transition words like 'however,' 'furthermore,' 'in contrast,' and 'similarly' to show relationships between different parts of the description.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate. There are instances of incorrect word choice and awkward phrasing. Expand your vocabulary related to spatial descriptions and changes over time. Use more precise language to describe the location and transformation of different areas in the TV center. For example, instead of 'more changes,' use 'significant alterations' or 'substantial modifications.' Instead of 'vast it,' use 'significant size' or 'considerable area.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and improper use of articles and prepositions. These errors significantly impede understanding. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence structure. Practice writing simple sentences and gradually incorporate more complex structures as your accuracy improves. Pay close attention to verb tenses (past, present, future) and ensure they are used consistently and correctly throughout the report.

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