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Band 4+: The two maps below show a housing estate now,and how it will look after redevelopment

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The image shows two schematic maps comparing a housing estate's current state and its redevelopment plans; currently, there are fifteen four-bedroom houses scattered within an area, accessed by a private road that branches out throughout the housing estate; the redevelopment plans illustrate significant changes with the introduction of a lake, a tennis court, and a flower garden area along with parking space; in the redevelopment plan, there are eighteen houses of different sizes - one, two, and three-bedroom houses arranged more uniformly.

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The maps give detailed information about changes taking place in a housing estate .Overall now the city has fully natural and evinorenmentaly friendly atmosphere and the city will be modernized with luxury skyscaper in the next years.

Looking at the detailes , housing estate has simple view , the four-room bedrooms are scattered around the map moreover this apartments are surrounded by different types of trees while main road is dived by channel and in the northern side of map , there is oval-shaped private road .

As for second view , plan will be made into modern city and would be added additional aminites , current map offers limited facilities but in the plan has more facilities .Many trees in the south corner expected to be chopped down ,flower garden is joined in the middle while four bedroom houses will change to one,two houses moreover private road will be built in half of the city to divide two section .The tennis court will be built in the west corner furthermore lake is took a part other side of map.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some issues with organization and accuracy. The overview is not very clear and introduces elements not present in the maps (e.g., "luxury skyscraper"). The description of the current and planned states includes some relevant details, but there are inaccuracies and a lack of clear structure. To improve, focus on providing a more accurate and organized description of the key features and changes shown in the maps. Ensure the overview clearly introduces the main changes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The overview is not well-defined and introduces elements not present in the maps (e.g., 'luxury skyscraper'). The body paragraphs jump between details without clear connections, making it difficult to follow the changes in the housing estate. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and create a smoother transition between sentences and paragraphs. Focus on grouping information logically, such as describing the current layout in one paragraph and the proposed changes in another.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and contains inaccuracies. For example, 'four-room bedrooms' is not precise. There are also instances where the word choice is not the most appropriate (e.g., 'divided by channel'). Expand your vocabulary related to urban planning and development to describe the changes more accurately. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and avoid repetition. Pay attention to the correct usage of prepositions and articles.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. For example, 'plan will be made into modern city' is grammatically incorrect. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread your work carefully to identify and correct errors. Consider using a grammar checker or seeking feedback from a language tutor to improve your accuracy.

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