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Band 4+: The two maps below show a housing estate now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.

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The image displays two layouts: one labeled "Now" and the other "Plans of reconstruction." In the "Now" section, there are eight four-bedroom houses, a main road running horizontally at the top, and several trees distributed throughout, with a private road curved in the center. In the "Plans of reconstruction" section, there are eleven houses of one, two, or three bedrooms, a main road at the top, intersections of a lake in the top middle, a tennis court in the upper right, a flower garden in the center, and a parking area at the bottom. Trees are more strategically placed around the houses and amenities, and small pathways between features are evident.

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This is the big picture of grand design for housing estate remodelling.

The housing estate currently only having one type house, four bedroom houses only. The new one provides three type housing with one, two, and three bedroom houses. Therefore, this would reach a broad variety of customers who will consider to buy a house in the new estate.

The private road of this estate is also shorter than the new concept housing that are reaching all house.

Also the new one, has a broad of new facilities such are lake, flower garden, and tennis court to enhance the quality living of people who live in this new housing

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housing: 5

estate: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some key changes in the housing estate redevelopment, such as the variety of house sizes and new facilities. However, it lacks specific details and comparisons that would provide a more comprehensive overview. To improve, include more specific details about the layout changes, road structure, and the placement of amenities. Also, ensure the language is more precise and avoid informal expressions. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and transitions between ideas. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively separate distinct points. The flow of information is somewhat disjointed, making it difficult to follow the comparisons between the 'Now' and 'Plans of reconstruction' layouts. Consider using more cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs, and ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the changes.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is an attempt to describe the changes, but the word choice is not always accurate or sophisticated. For example, 'broad variety of customers' and 'broad of new facilities' could be expressed more precisely. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary that accurately reflects the details in the layouts and demonstrates a better command of lexical features. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity. Sentence structure is often awkward, and there are issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. For example, 'The housing estate currently only having one type house' and 'the new concept housing that are reaching all house' contain grammatical errors. Focus on improving sentence structure and ensuring correct grammar and punctuation throughout the report.

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