Band 5+: The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the changes to the island after the construction of tourist facilities. It identifies key features such as the new accommodation, pier, roads, and footpath. However, the description could be more detailed and specific. For example, mentioning the location of the restaurant and reception relative to other features would improve the response. Also, while the report notes the increase in accessibility, it could benefit from more explicit comparisons between the 'before' and 'after' states, highlighting the transformation more effectively. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

The report presents a general overview of the changes to the island, but the organization could be improved for better clarity. Consider grouping information more thematically, such as discussing the changes to infrastructure (pier, roads, footpaths) in one paragraph and the addition of facilities (reception, restaurant, accommodation) in another. The progression of ideas could be smoother with more explicit linking words and phrases to guide the reader. For example, use phrases like 'In contrast to the initial state' or 'Following the development' to enhance coherence.

The vocabulary is adequate for describing the main features, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. Instead of repeatedly using general terms like 'facilities' and 'development,' try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to tourism and infrastructure. For instance, use 'amenities' instead of 'facilities' or 'infrastructure' instead of 'development' in certain contexts. Also, consider using synonyms to avoid repetition, such as 'jetty' instead of 'pier.'

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage (e.g., 'the island'), and sentence structure. For example, 'development that have been made' should be 'developments that have been made' or 'development that has been made'. Also, review the use of prepositions and ensure they are accurate in context. Proofreading carefully for these errors will improve the overall accuracy of your writing.