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Band 6+: The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two maps with a scale of 100 Metres each, depicting an island before and after the construction of tourist facilities. The "Before" map shows an untouched island with a beach on one side and trees. The "After" map shows significant development, including a reception area, restaurant, accommodation units, a swimming area designated by buoys, a pier, and a vehicle track and footpaths connecting different areas. No numerical data points/percentages are provided.

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The maps demonstrate alters, which were experienced by the given island, before and after appearance of some buildings constructed for tourists.

Overall, the island became residentional area, including a lots of accommodations and footpathes on almost its entire territory. Also, with new created facilities, now, it is more adopted location for tourists than before.

Regarding the right side of the maps, it is clearly seen that, in comparison with the left one, there are no significant changes, excluding addition of residences and footpathes. Green areas contained some palms stayed unmutabled excluded one of them, which was replaced to the bottom of the map.

In terms of the left side of the maps, the island, before constructions, was not suitable for living of people, who visited that place. However, now it has all necessary facilities for tourists as restaurant, reception, footpathes, pier and even special area for swimming near the beach.

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The report addresses the task by describing the changes to the island after the construction of tourist facilities. However, the organization could be improved for clarity, and the language contains some inaccuracies. To improve, focus on structuring the report with a clear overview, body paragraphs that compare specific features before and after development, and use more precise language to describe the changes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the structure could be improved for better flow. The introduction and overview are present, but the body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, using 'Furthermore,' 'In contrast,' or 'Similarly' can help guide the reader. Paragraphing could be more effectively managed to group related information logically.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there are instances of imprecise word choice ('alters,' 'residentional'). Expanding your range of vocabulary and using more specific terms would enhance the report. For example, instead of 'residentional area,' you could use 'tourist resort' or 'developed area.' Focus on using vocabulary that accurately reflects the changes and features shown in the maps.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Errors include incorrect verb forms ('became residentional area'), subject-verb agreement issues ('Green areas contained some palms stayed unmutabled'), and awkward phrasing ('before appearance of some buildings'). To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures accurately and proofread carefully for grammatical errors. Pay attention to verb tenses, article usage, and sentence construction.

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