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Band 5+: The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1910 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two pie charts on world population. The first chart for 1910 shows a total population of 1700 million, with regional distribution as follows: Asia 60%, Europe (including Russia) 25%, North America 5%, Africa 4%, Latin America 3%, and Others 3%. The second chart for 2010 shows a total population of 6 billion, with the distribution being: Asia 54%, Europe (including Russia) 14%, Africa 10%, Latin America 8%, Middle East & North Africa 6%, North America 5%, and Others 3%.

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The pie chart illustrates the changes in the proportion of world population across six different continents from 1910 to 2010.

In general, it is noticeable that different trends were observed in all the given continents. While Asia recorded the highest percentage of world’s people among all the given categories for the whole year, the opposite was true for ‘others’. Moreover, Latin America joined during the periods.

At the beginning of the period, Asia was the most common group in the world, at 60%. This was followed by a gradual decline to 54% in 2010, and remained the peak level of world population among all the given trends. The second most popular category, Europe showed higher out of others, at quarter. After which it declined significantly to 14% in the year 2010.

In 1910, ‘others’, North America, Middle East & North America, and Africa showed the lowest proportion of world population, starting at 3% and ending at 5%. In the following years, Middle East & North America and Africa steadily grew to almost twice as much in the period 2010, at 6% and one in ten. ‘Others’ and North America remained unchanged, and ‘others’ showed the lowest figure of world population across all the given continents. Moreover, Latin America was discovered during the years, and reached 6% of world population by the end of the year.

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task and identifies key trends, such as the dominance of Asia and the decline in Europe's proportion. However, there are several inaccuracies in how the data is presented and described. For instance, the report claims Latin America 'joined' or was 'discovered' during the period, which is an inappropriate way to describe a change in statistical categories. Additionally, there is confusion in the grouping of regions (e.g., 'Middle East & North America' instead of 'Middle East & North Africa') and some mathematical descriptions are unclear. To improve, focus on using precise academic language to describe statistical changes and ensure that the names of the categories match the visual data exactly.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of ideas is somewhat logical, but the progression is hindered by confusing phrasing and imprecise grouping. The overview attempts to summarize trends but uses vague language (e.g., 'different trends were observed in all the given continents'). To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear, singular purpose - such as one for declining regions and one for growing regions. Additionally, avoid using transition words like 'Moreover' if the following sentence does not logically extend the previous point.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use varied vocabulary, but many word choices are inaccurate or unnatural in a data reporting context. For example, describing a population group as 'the most common group' or 'the most popular category' is inappropriate; 'the largest proportion' or 'the most populous region' would be more accurate. Phrases like 'Latin America was discovered' or 'Europe showed higher out of others' are semantically incorrect. Focus on learning academic collocations used for describing trends, such as 'accounted for,' 'constituted,' or 'represented'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but frequent errors in grammar and sentence construction impede clarity. There are issues with article usage, prepositional phrases, and subject-verb agreement. For instance, 'at quarter' should be 'at a quarter' or 'at 25%'. Some sentences are fragmented or awkwardly constructed, making it difficult to follow the intended meaning. Aim for greater precision in how you link data to the subjects of your sentences.

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