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Band 6+: The two pie charts illustrate how different financial incomes contributed to the economy of Malaysia percentagewise in 1995 and 2015.

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The image displays two pie charts titled 'Financial Incomes Contribution to Malaysia Economy (1995 and 2015)'. For 1995, the contributions are Exports 50%, Petroleum 30%, Tourism 10%, and Other 10%. For 2015, the contributions are Exports 45%, Petroleum 25%, Tourism 20%, and Other 10%.

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Pie charts demonstrates differences in profits which affect to goverments economy state between 1995 and 2015.

Overall, there are several types of incomes such as, exports, petroleum, tourism, and others. While tourism have a visible growth, exports, petroleum and others in Malaysia have a fixed rate.

Looking at the information in more detail, it is clear that an export of products to Malaysia provides 50% cash in 1995 and dominated other types of incomes, even after reducing for 5% in 2015. The other types of sources of incomes stayed remain also from 1995 till 2015.

In addition, fluctuations were only in petroleum and tourism. Petroleum was one of the influental types of incomes in 1995 at 30% but it have minimal decrease for 5% in 2015. In comparison tourism has a significant rise by increasing to 10% from 1995 to 2015. Rise of money from tourism do not change the initial persentagewise.

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tourism: 5

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incomes: 4

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The report addresses the task, but there are some issues with accuracy and clarity. The language is not always precise, and there are some generalizations that could be more specific. To improve, focus on providing more detailed comparisons and using more accurate language to describe the changes in percentages. Also, ensure that the overall trends and specific data points are clearly presented.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview and attempts to highlight key trends, but the organization could be improved for better flow. The use of cohesive devices is present but not always effective, leading to some choppiness. Paragraphing is adequate but could be more strategically employed to group related ideas more effectively. For instance, the final sentence feels somewhat disconnected from the preceding discussion.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. Some word choices are not entirely accurate ('profits' instead of 'financial incomes,' 'fixed rate' is vague). Expanding the range of vocabulary and using more precise terms would enhance the report. For example, instead of 'visible growth,' consider 'noticeable increase.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense consistency ('tourism have' should be 'tourism has'), subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Sentence structure is relatively simple, and while understandable, it lacks sophistication. Improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of sentence structures would enhance the report's overall quality. For example, consider using more complex sentences to express relationships between data points.

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