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Band 6+: There 2 maps of Paradise Island in the past and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant There 2 maps of Paradise Island in the past and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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The image shows two maps of "Paradise Island," labeled "Past" and "Present." "Past" features a beach, pier, boat, scientific research station, natural spring, and rocks, all surrounded by the sea. "Present" includes a beach (sectioned off for swimming), pier, cruise ship, hotel complex, cycle path, BBQ area, open restaurant, scenic lookout, swimming pool, cafe, and rocks, also surrounded by the sea.

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The proveded a two map illustrates the redevlopment that took at Paradise island, between the past and the present.

Overall, the island underwent a significant transformation. Changes on the island involved modifying the design of the land by adding more places, as well as a slight change on the outside of the land.

In the past, the paradise island was located in the middle of the sea, had a Rocks in the right side of the ocean, and there was a beach on the upper left of the island. There was a tiny pier for the boat. Notably, inside the island, there was a building for a scientific research station, six sift and a natural spring at the end of the land.

Since then, the island witnessed transformation. They added a science lookout behind the rock on the upper right of the island; they also expanded the pier for cruise ships. Inside the paradise, they structured the map of the island. They have converted the scientific research station into a hotel with a swimming pool, and they removed the sift to have more space to add an open station in the middle of the land, with a cycle path at the bottom of the plan and a BBQ area above it. Furthermore, the natural spring remained unchanged, but they added a cafe in front of it.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

island: 8

paradise: 3

there: 3

station: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing an overview and comparing the main features of the island in the past and present. It includes relevant details and makes clear comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions, such as mentioning 'six sift' (likely a typo or misinterpretation) and not clearly describing the beach sectioned off for swimming. The report could be improved by ensuring all key features are accurately described and by refining the language for clarity and precision.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs for past and present. However, the flow is slightly disrupted by awkward phrasing and some unclear references (e.g., 'six sift' and 'the plan' instead of 'the island'). The use of cohesive devices is adequate but could be more varied and precise. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use linking words more effectively to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'significant transformation', 'witnessed transformation'). However, there are several inaccuracies and awkward word choices (e.g., 'proveded', 'redevlopment', 'sift' instead of 'huts' or 'buildings', 'science lookout' instead of 'scenic lookout'). To improve, use a wider range of precise vocabulary and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Avoid repetition and aim for more natural collocations. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are noticeable grammar errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity (e.g., 'The proveded a two map illustrates', 'had a Rocks', 'they structured the map'). Some sentences are awkwardly phrased. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure. Proofread to eliminate basic errors and ensure that each sentence is grammatically complete and clear.

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