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Band 6+: There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter, you should describe the event explain why you think he/she would be interested in it suggest an arrangement to meet there with him/her You should write at least 200 words.

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Dear friend,

Hi, how are you? Are you okay? I hope you are free these days. I was wondering if you could accompany me in upcoming concert. It would be nice of you. I also got tickets.

Firstly, the event will be held on January 28th at 10 a.m. in Vilnius Old Town. I think it will be in a building. Otherwise, people don’t go there. It would be to cold to stand there.

Of course, there will be your favourite singer. What’s more, our old friends from school will also be there. I think that will be great way to kill some time.

Therefore, don’t think to much and accept the invitation. In the morning we can have a little chat and take few cups of coffee. Also, we can make a meet with our friends. So, I hope you will join me.

To sum up, I hope you receive a letter. You will take this into consideration. Also, I hope you will make decision fast. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

All the best,

Donas

Word Count: 179

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

think: 3

there: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task, but some details are missing. For example, the type of concert is not specified, and the description of the event could be more detailed. Additionally, some sentences are not directly related to the task, such as 'I hope you are free these days.'

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is mostly easy to follow, but some sentences are not well-connected. For example, the transition between the description of the event and the suggestion to meet could be smoother. Additionally, some sentences are a bit unclear, such as 'It would be to cold to stand there.'

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary is limited, and some words are not used accurately. For example, 'kill some time' is not the most natural expression in this context. Additionally, some phrases are a bit informal, such as 'don't think to much.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

There are some grammatical errors, such as missing articles, incorrect verb tenses, and sentence fragments. For example, 'I was wondering if you could accompany me in upcoming concert' should be 'to the upcoming concert.' Additionally, some sentences are not punctuated correctly.

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