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Band 5+: There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it.

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Dear John,

Hope this letter finds you in a radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to inform you that my city council has organized a drawing competition for all ages in upcoming weekend.

As you know we both are keen towards drawing competitions and also won many of them in the past. The competition is based on social awareness program, we need to pick any topic and need to show creativity by sketching both the cause and solution for it in single drawing. There will be also many awards and gifts for the winners as well as for runner up.

Currently our semester break is going on and you will be free all this time so, I think we should participate in this event and spent this free time by participating in this event. If you are willing to join this event with me then get back to me as soon as possible, because registration are open until next Tuesday.

Hoping to hear back a positive response back from you soon.

Best Regards,

Darshil

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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drawing: 3

event: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses the task by inviting a friend to a relevant event. Minor improvements could enhance clarity and precision.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly clear, but some sentences could be restructured for better flow and improved cohesion. The overall structure is sound.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but more sophisticated word choices could elevate the letter's impact. Some phrases could be more concise and precise.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter conveys its message, grammatical errors and inconsistencies detract from the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is key to enhancing the score.

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