24 Hours Only: Get 39% OFF on Our Premium Plan - Check Out Now!

Letter

Band 5+: There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

See all user-written answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

Dear Sir or Madam

The reason why I am addressing you is that request the local council not to sell the public park.

I am Nilufar Hamidova who live in this neighborhood near the public park. I have been living in this area for a long time with family members.

If I were to describe the importance of the park, it is nature area where people relax and have recreation as well as it serve as a venue for people where they can socialize with our other.

If the council continues with its plan, I will have to raise issue to upper authorities. That is why I want to the situation change for better side.

I hope you understand my situation and accept my request.

Best regards,

Nilufar Hamidova.

Word Count: 129

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but the description of the park's importance and the action to be taken could be more detailed and persuasive. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and clearer transitions between ideas. Grammar errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is adequate, but a wider range of more precise and sophisticated words would enhance the letter's impact. Some lexical choices are slightly inaccurate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is essential for a higher score.

Answers On The Same Topic:

There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

Dear Sir/Madam, I am contacting you, as a resident of Area 11, to express my concerns regarding the local council’s proposal to sell the public park located next to my house. I believe that this park should be preserved. The park is much more than a place for leisure. It is a secure place for […]

Band 7+

There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

Band 7+

There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

Dear sir/madam I am a tenant in the ABC society for 15 years now. I am writing you this letter regarding your recent decision to sell the public park. I am here to express my dissatisfaction on your choice and the several consequences which could happen if you decide to ahead with it. The society […]

Band 5+

There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

Dear Sir or Madam, The reason behind this letter is that I want to explain the importance of this park and give some recommendations instead of its sale. My name is Rayhona, and my last name is Rahimaliyeva. I have been living in Rishtan for around a decade with my family members. I want to […]

Band 7+

See All

Band 5+: There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

Other Topics:

You are organizing a class reunion. Write a letter to your former classmates. You should include: - Explain why you are organizing the reunion - Suggest a location, date and time - Suggest activities and ask for their ideas and preferences

You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. Why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask for the recipe also invite them to the party.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium