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Band 5+: There is an annual work party next month, which is held every year. Write a letter to your colleagues to co-arrange the party. In your letter: Say what would you do differently than last year Say what you think were some of the things not so good last year Suggest where to meet to plan for the party.

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Dear Tim,

Hope you are doing well. i am writing this letter for inform you that our organization arrange 50th work anniversary party as we celebrate every year. So I would like to do something different than the past celebrated parties.

Firstly, i want this time better location as compered to last one. I planned to book rooftop club or cafe as we can enjoy view from top. Moreover, I would like to plan some theme based costumes not just professional last like party.

On last year party, few things which were wrong so no one were satisfied. Food is one of them, it was now as tastey as we expected. In addition , sitting arrangement they didn’t provide any chairs of sofas so everyone feels tiered as we have to listened speech of HR while standing.

I will text you location where we will meet and plan all the party. I bring a book so we can note every point and make proper schedule of every things.

See you soon.

Yours lovely,

Minu patel

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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every: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The suggestions for improvement and the description of shortcomings from last year are clear. However, some aspects could be more detailed and polished.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, the numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect the overall flow and coherence. Improved sentence structure and grammar would significantly enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but the range is limited. More sophisticated vocabulary and precise word choices would improve the overall quality of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that impact clarity and understanding. Significant improvement in grammar and punctuation is needed to achieve a higher score.

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