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Band 4+: There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and - invite your friend, - explain what happens at the party, - describe the tradition and why it's important in your country, - say why it is important for your friend to be there.

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Dear Raman

Hope you are doing well! I wanted you to visit on Diwali as you will get a chance to come in India even you will enjoy alot. Near and dear ones enjoyed alot in many different was such as by wearing differnt clother, enjoy fetive meals and explode fireworks.

This festival is important as on this day sixth Guru from Sikh Sahiban realsed the 40 sikh from Gwaliar fort and then with the happiness people burns the lights. And it festival of Lights.

Even last time told me you have final project on ‘Golablisation Tradition’ when you will come here you can explore numerous things behind this festival, which helps you alot in your study. Along with it, we can make unforgetable memories. And come with family member so that they can get to know with each other.

Just let me know what you think- I can help you with everything.

Your lovingly

Jaspreet Kaur

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

festival: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but some aspects could be more thoroughly explained and developed.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow and organization could be improved. Grammatical errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Numerous grammatical errors detract from the overall clarity and accuracy of the letter. Improved grammar is needed.

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